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waiting for new chaps and the story was very good we will like you to continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️?????❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
i hate this story, seems like a low quality "young master template n 4
In every chapter I was grinning crazily, it is sweet and so good. Am still in the early chapters and I gotta say, it is going to be a great story between Alayah and Aaron. Love it!
Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
Kiba is perhaps the greatest harem mc out there! yes i even put him above konrad!his sassiness, his flirty ways, him going around cucking dudes , his shamelessness! and boy is he smooth!you are tired of all those r18 and harem stories where the mc don't do any effort to get the women in bed? you tired of reading about them using their stupid system and aphrodisiac scent to turn women into lusty sluts?well look no further this is the book you are looking for!kiba is smooth! knows how to flirt! and he does not need no system or incubus powers to get a woman under him and that alone makes this story a MUST READ!
a good story with an MC who only cares about him and his quest to have eternal life !...............................mmmmmmmm....................................
more please it's really good, like where it's going and please dont drop as most system novels in this theme dont last long... thank you!!!!
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