"So only by hurting you badly will you be mine...What else must I destroy to possess you?..." What a strong word for a man to tell her how badly he wants her. But must he be proud to admit that she means a lot to him and that he loves her rather than making her feel inferior and so beneath him...
Story so far isn't so bad. Pretty basic setting, girl plays dating sim, girl dies, girl now has to survive in said game with like a twist to keep it interesting. The writing was mediocre in the first few pages but is improving pretty quickly surprisingly. The mc is pretty chill and has like a personality. The love interests aren't that developed as of now, but I like what I'm seeing. What really was the turning point of this story to me was definitely chapter 11. Like damn, I just didn't expect that kind of thing to happen in this kind of story. If you're a fan of this genre, give it a shot and stick with it. Review may change depending on what's to come.
i like the way mc kent collect sp. nima is also funny.
Ah yes, I had to drop this after 5 chapters just because of the rampant Selfcest. The Su Yu on Su Yu action was too much for my poor innocent eyes.
It is a pity that I can not edit my review. Nonetheless, I have made a new one to state that the translation has improved quite significantly. There are now fewer errors in the latest chapters. The consistent upload of 3 chapters per day is also proof of the translator's hard work put into the story.
looking good so far. Great promise but seems too early since we are barely 150 chaps in. I just hope it doesnt turn to shit in the long run.
Classic world background, BUT ITS OKKKKKKKKKKKKKK?️???????????????????????????????????????????????
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Not that bad, the writing is doesn’t flow as smooth as some other novel, but that what happen if you not a experienced author, or has a editor. but is decent enough, hence the 4 stars.
I find it hard to believe that the MC at peak mana control realm can't suppress with his aura alone the soldiers of wu kingdom in the mist forest who were part of soldiers who hurt meiyi who were just meager qi realm and the commander is probably only at early mana perception realm despite mc being enrage why is that? When a bad guy has higher realm , they can suppress thier enemy with aura alone but the mc don't?And why is he always late? When the elf queen is starting to battle allaina , seth is already near and he only took action when the queen is nearly dying going for the tree. As if you pause the whole world when you're writing a battle scene only focusing the time on battle. I mean seth should be already moving towards the tree to weaken allaina and yet he seems to just stood like an idiot watching the fight. And this kind of thing happens all the time making some kind of hero saving the day. Seriously! Stop that kind of BS!
Almost 40 chapters, so time for an author's shameless review.This is my first novel, I may do a lot of mistakes, but I hope that you enjoy to read it as much as I enjoy to write it.You can use this review to ask any questions, I'll be sure to answer all.
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