Definitely an interesting book with a new concept of story... Keep up with the updates, author.
Just started but looking forward to more
I like this story very much, Download this for just this story ????
I’ve read up to where it is currently, but from what I can tell so far, it’s very good. The world is genuinely thought out and the characters show real emotion. Of course there are some tropes, however that seems to a major plot point the story will revolve around. There are very minor grammar errors around the story but nothing large enough to justify a lower than 5 star rating. The only glaring I see right now is the update schedule. Creativity is hard to come by sometimes though so I have that a 3 for now. No issues anywhere else though. If you’re similar to me and you like reading reviews before starting a story, you should definitely give this story a try. There aren’t many chapters currently, but I’m sure you might enjoy it.I hope this review will give the author a little motivation through this story. :))
xxx I love it. Orion seems more like a god from a dark romance world
Currently about 60 chapters in and I'm loving it! Each main character has a detailed back story that helps you fall in love with them. I'm happy I finally found a series that has so many chapters already published ❤️?
I read chapter one and I'm in love with this story. Lucia is my favorite gal ??
hidden gem cultivation story; everyone that likes cultivation novels will love this one. This story has a slower much gentler pace which lets you understand the mc and his personality more which i really appreciate especially because most stories on webnovel are rather fast paced and only describe situations on the surface level.Definitely give this novel a try!!!!
The intro got me hooked up even though I've not really read the story fully . I can't wait to dive in . It's such a good piece for calming the mind . I love it .
So, this is definitely AI gen work. I am not just making things up here, I have attached proof. This isn't even the most advanced AI detector. You can literally use anyone on the internet to check how bad this is.Now onto the next part:The MCs character is annoying, he has a very shallow character. But I can ignore that as a blank slate for reader to self insert themselves like most Japanese protagonists. But even then I cannot ignore the story progression. Gandhari making decisions for him in front of Indira, while saying she'll save him. The annoying fact that Krishna already knew about his reincarnation but if that was not enough, he added oil to the fire by telling him more about himself, the system too. Just makes you wonder where this is going. He is going for Pandava friendship, while the Pandavas don't even want him. The only good thing I found in the 20+ chapters is the bow battle against Arjun, and that's it.Also, I'll mention something else which is very annoying. A lot of chapters are told from another view all over again. This is clearly a way to increase chapter count. Don't get me wrong, multiple POVs are a good thing, but what the author is doing instead is telling you a summary of first two chapters in the new 3rd chapter. This seems an honestly bad writing decision at best and a really evil ploy to scam us for more money while giving 2/3 of the content at worst. I'll give the author the benefit of the doubt and hope it's the former.Tbf neither the story decisions nor the characters are likeable. All the people you are supposed to like, you'll dislike and all the ones you are supposed to dislike, you will dislike too :). Basically nothing to root for in the story. I have read till 40+ chaps for now. Just one above the free version, I might sound critical, but this is a paid novel. I will be paying for it, so it has to be worth the money, and with the glaring issues I doubt it is that.All that being said. These are just the issues I had, so, I thought I'll point them out. However, I do know that writing is hard, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Just be positive and try not to use AI, it strips the soul off your work, and you'll not really improve either.Good Luck Man.
didn't read yet but I know it will be really good
Bre-rer-rer-rer-rer!