The character has no backbone, couldn't even refuse a simple request from a girl. Disappointment. I like the idea of the story, but the characters are just bad. Forced and emotionless. Also, the MC is cowardly and dense. Not being able to connect any information. It was clearly forced for the plot. Ultimately I'm dropping the story because of the MC's lack of strong will to oppose others and terrible character development. Which resulted in a bad MC.
Story outline is in point and i reLy libe the characteRs. The authoR has a really good imagination with thos one. wonder what new rad or twist to betwll
this story is best . the best slice of life , well written story, the background setting is well thought ......... .............................. .................................... .........................................
saya tidak suka EQ mc dalam melakukan sesuatu, dan hasil tanpa penjelasan yang rasional membuatku muak................................................
Hi and awesome job! I've only read a few chapters so far but I can't wait to go deeper into the story. I found the pace and build up refreshing for the genre. I'll add to my collection because I'm sure there's more in store for Mael's journey! Thank you for the swap and good luck as well with your work!
Despite promising myself Not to read trial novels again, Here I am against my better judgement,Anyway, You will only get this game if you have played Board games like Dungeons And Dragons. But with immersive reality. Basically You are the player in an VRMMORPG but you can’t control your movements, But it’s decided by dice throw. I haven’t played those board games either so I am mot exactly clear about the concepts, I have just seen it being played sometimes. The translation is quite bad so it’s even more confusing.First Chapter is about him doing first mission, “.Rd - 7” is dice throw. KP is a Dungeon Master, Basically they recount the story, Like how MC threw a 0 so his shotgun exploded. You can google Dungeons and Dragons to understand the concept better before reading. Anyway I couldn’t continue because of the lack of clarification from the Translator and the almost MTL level quality of translation. Such a novel need so much info to understand what’s going on, Yet the Translators explained nothing.A new concept to Gaming novels. I have no idea what bs the synopsis is even about.
Realistic stories always touch your heart as you can relate the things depicted in the story to your life. The way emotions are being written distinctly shows how much emotions are embedded in each part of the story. I personally believe that a good story is all about emotions, feelings, and the difficulties a person undergoes during his journey to be successful. This is the story that gives you all! So, without any thought just add this story to your libraries. Through the description in the story, one can analyze what kind of character Rudra is!! The story is slow-paced in the first few chapters and that seems okay as the character is still building up. Keep up with your good work, dear author, and best wishes for the contest.
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