The idea is well written and formatted. However the story itself is very chaotic. Essentially you announce route 1 then proceed and suddenly you snap over to route 66 instead of route 1. This makes it seem like you're mixing up your stories and makes the storyline very murky. Entertaining but murky.
Even if the slave wanted to remove it there are additional spells that prevent it from being tampered with the only way to remove it was to get an artificer to remove it, but they rarely do anything that isn't in platinum but the demihumans didn't know about this information since it is a closely guarded secret to the upper echelons.
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Only shooting stars break the mold
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?
Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
"Eunji, give me a call when you get this, Zelo just rang and said you haven't shown up for your classes and he can't get a hold of you,"
"that's the spirit"Alice said
(Ralph's attention is soon redirected back towards Principle Lewis who is holding out his hand)
Frisk didn't move an inch. They kept their mouth shut. Their knife was glimmering, and they were determined to kill Sans.