Cool name
This novel is soo booringgggg what a waste of my time.
Am I... the only who gets really hungry while reading this? ;-; hungry for both human and dog food that is
I love the story but the ending is kinda dissapointing...
I am giving you a 5 because it is well written and interesting!
The only thing I would suggest is possibly push the world building out a few chapters because the first 3 chapters are slow and you want to ideally capture your reader's attention front the start. I would find a way to weave this stuff into the events of the story as trickles of info.
Well, the story is undeserving of the rank 4. The translation quality is good and the stability of updates is pretty good as well but anything other than that is not good. The plot is monotonous basically what happens is Mc signs in gets heaven defying skills, instantly comprehends them also gets items to improve cultivation and an enemy comes out of nowhere to force the mc to appear and remind people that he exists. Literally nothing else happens. The characters are are nothing extraordinary. Only the cat is somewhat interesting and everyone else is just typical Xianxia template. The world building well is there even any world building here.
trash he can't even discipline his child and just let them go make trouble again and again and again, then he will go act like a pitiful dog then if that doesn't work the face slapping starts rinse and repeat
Good book. Easy read, the story picks up right from the beginning. The main character Carter seems like an interesting person but he needs much more developing. Overall, it's quite a decent book, highly recommended. Kudos to the author.
Raw
Suddenly becomes super racist from Chapter 114. How is it possible, you ask? I was as just as surprised that the author was able to include racism into a cultivation novel.Essentially, the author made white people the demons in the book and goes off on racist rants.Complete disappointment.
Read up to chapter 23 and there had been no chapter where the author hadn't killed me with those cliffhangers. The author seemed to be on a spree with those, while hooking us like an incubus ? the characters even side ones are so beautifully developed and the MC slowly battles with his own emotions. Such a fresh book to read with a hybrid mc.
Golden spoon and plot armor. What is a point of novel with mc who can see ODS/tips about business that result in 100% Succes in investments.And on top of that after doing 0 by himself, he still go full face slapping on others. Its 100% system do it all for mc type of novel.