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Nice story so far, like the concepts. Lets see how it goes.
A very good book, same with his previous writing quality which is also good, i really like the element of mythology and how he seamlessly combines it with modern society, a stable update even occasionally bonus chapters and missed chapter.
The romance angle which is slowly developed from unwillingness to the power couple they evolve into is very admirable and well thought of by the author.Also, the emotions and characters are well fleshed out.I recommend everyone to try it.
That's my personal opinion so don't take offense.The writing quality is good. Some mistakes here and there but acceptable. The writing style seems a little bit weird as the author tries to make things sound very powerful: Divine that, Divine this. Some logic mistakes too, like those assassins. No one would send some weak chickens like this to assassinate an high ranking noble. Descriptions are too long. It leaves less room for imagination which I think is an essential part of reading. The fights also seem too slow because author writes too much detail.As I don't have that much information about the story it is unpredictable. But at first sight it seems like a standart continental war story with fantasy as foundation and some schemes in the background.Mc seems like a regular Isekai-Mc: Strong-willed with cheats.The world is a big fantasy world with many races. Powerlevels explained clearly.All in all its nothing really new, while every story is unique on its own. It has quite many logic errors.It may sound harsh but it's mostly because I have high standarts as I've already read so much and find many stories predictable.
Just wanna review something so there it is
It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
Want to see how a transmigrator, Situ, aspiring to control his own fate, rises from a world where humans are considered cannon fodder in a battle between two top races, the Ancient Devil clan and the Ancient Celestial clan?
I'm just happy my favorite writer from Wattpad is Here! I had read her other stories over there, but I have to admit, I do love this one as well! This one is vastly different from the usual fare I read so far, but it's mildly dark humor, generally overall amusing when it comes to the system, and has that flair you come to expect from Electra. Glad to see you're writing up a storm again!
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Greatest novel i read on demon king genre,I mean c'mon every demon king out there just so happens to want a harem and do bad stuff,then again you realize that there top tier writing such as this one available here.I mean mc so happens to be a nice guy wanting a daily life,and to me this is like starting everything great all over again.Over all great plot,not many novels have this that's for sure and Thanks to the author for creating such a great novel and still serving us with a golden plate.Thanks.
I just came for the FP given for review ?
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