From what I read, this story is fine. The writing can be a little too conversational rather than literary, but some of the descriptions are interesting. However, some of them I found to be needlessly overcomplicated to the point where it becomes hard to follow and less compelling without re-reading. The world building of this story is good, I feel like I would enjoy this more if the writing was more straightforward and unpretentious.
Good work author I really like villain stories and this didn't disappoint very nice work I recommend it and author keep up the good work ? well done
This book so far is all about the character's complexity and growth.First, there's really no overpowered cheat system so far. He goes back in time but ultimately he doesn't even choose a class he is all that familiar with. Sure he has some skills and game knowledge from his previous life, but not really too much in-depth usage of this experience like finding epic treasures or performing speed runs based on this knowledge.So for now, the real appeal of this story centers around the contrast of this character. Sure he is kind of a mischievous, perverted fellow at heart but he also is a trainee priest with some kind of deep reason for doing this - it's definitely a first for me to see this. Also he appeared to be a loner in his last life but now he surprisingly has some friends and even somewhat stumbled on repairing a broken relationship with this neighbor.Either way, there's humor, heart, and potentially some intelligent gameplay in this story. And hey, who doesn't love a bold yet thoughtful fatty as an MC.
this is a nice book and it has potential and you are a very good writer so have a good day and keep making more chapter looking forward to it.
Can’t wait to get more chapters. It’s sad to see that it was not selected by the editor. It’s great novel, which is well written, super interesting. You won’t feel like dropping it till you read all 60. The best part about the MC is his brains and how he can scheme well, and think for the future while most MC are too emotional and fall for cliche traps set by even a random nobody who will die a few chapters later. Lastly n most importantly, it’s inspired from Otherworldly Evil Monarch which should be enough for you to pick this up.
Horny, trashy mc? ✔1000 yo retard with brain like sieve ✔ sad past ✔deserves everything that comes his way? ✔Might have changed, I couldn't deal with this bs any longer. (11th chapter)1st ever review, which is equally as bad as this novel.P.S. Author, I suggest reading couple of books about world building and actually thinking before describing characters. You've written about how mc is 1000 yo, yet behaves like a brat. I bet his 79 points in intelligence is probably his iq (His physical stats are like 0.6). He hates his family, even tho he behaves equally as bad towards other human beings.
Reading this feels like a novel written by a Reader rather than an Author. There is no exciting plots, the MC is plain without much character. Supposedly a guy with ***** previous life and plus 17 years, but still acts like a child, no uniqueness to him . Most characters are also bland. This is a mixed fruit juice of a reader who read a lot of beast taming novels.