Naonoe
Another great novel by Mobisa. Hopefully you don't leave us hanging in the middle of it all and kindl continue with the same update stability. Wish you all the best.
It's a dark story with a strong opening before things get worse. The MC only appears in the second chapter (technically the third because of how the story is structured) and before you could pity him, all hell's let loose. And you guessed it, it only gets worse from there.Not the style though, written in the third person present, it puts you right into the thick of it. I can't say "enjoyable" because it shows the darkest horrors but it's well-written. Keep up the good work!
Leader of Ridicoulus Human I.
my Father yelled like a rock singer from inside the house.
I could use a little fuel myself
I could use a little fuel myself
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
He felt hands grab his shoulders, pulling him violently onto the sidewalk. The man who had hit him groaned and swore as he pulled the boy up the curb and on the concrete. No one else was around to witness his pain, or they merely did not care enough to come to his aid. The man pulled the leg of Xavier's pants upward, examining the wound.
I need to get myself away from this place
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Damn it, Male hormones is such a pain
"I think we're fine" we both said together
