read a few chapters and so far the story seems pretty solid, there's room for improvement of course, but it's good for a fresh novel
at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans.there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty
I like these stories when the soft FL character becomes a baddie. Looking forward to some swift retribution and face slapping .
So far i am loving it.No red flages or anything that seems off to me,but that's my personal taste. Feel free to judge for yourself.There were some grammar issues at the beginning, but i believe they have been resolved.I didn't double chech, i dont care about it anyway since i read mtl from time to time.
Pretty gahdamn good novel heading to be a masterpiece
I love this novel. Give it a read it’s a little different from the usual romance tropes on here and it’s refreshing
The plot of the story is all well and good...but the MC relationship with the side characters especially mei is very unnecessary and the author in my own opinion is not being realistic. In the favourite words of my best author....author San didn't think this book through...So...up to chapter 110,the book went well....but from then...it started going downhill...???it's like the author didn't have a template for the design of the MC and he is just writing as he feels like ..not good at all and not well thought out...u can say that the MC halo the main protagonist has is wasted on him by the author...after a while of seeing rubbish....I just couldn't continue past another 20 chapters....and this is saying a lot for me who likes zombies and apocalypse genres....very disappointing. Also...wat is up with always putting the name of the street and city and even the time in every chapter. it's not like we will even know where the city or street is and what it will do with my life .And how is it possible that it took only five days for the zombie apocalypse to encompass the whole world, destroy the military and destroy social order....he is belitiing the military too much...I don't even think he did his research....and it took about a 100 chapters to go through an empty plot and character building in this book....too bad....waste of time...I mean no offence though...just my honest thoughts...???
hi author I just want to ask if there will be harem or no ..............................................................................
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