Already hyped before reading the first Word of the first Chapter.PS: This is Book two and you should read rebirth of the strongest Guildmaster first.it is a masterpiece in my eyesone for allall for onego Elites go
I really loved this! It's so rare to find high-quality writing on WebNovel, and I devoured all 7 chapters. I love Eli so much; her personality is charming and endearing, and the story is surprisingly dark, which surprised me. There's some world-building happening at a nice measured pace, with an emphasis on character relations. Some of the writing in the last few chapters feels a little rushed compared to the brilliance of the first few chapters, but the author definitely has the capacity to produce a really high-quality story. Looking forward to see where the series goes! (Shipping Eli and Lara)
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Honestly one of the best things that i have read in a while. The pacing it slow but it all makes sense. The characters are likeable for the most part. Some answers are missing but I think that is on purpose. Keep up the good work I am looking forward to reading more ^_^
INTERESTING STORY!It was really worth the read...The way the author described each scene was so great that I could almost picture them out clearly in my mind.Keep it up, I hope to see more chapters in the coming days.*^_^*
As of Chapter 110Writing Quality: 5/5Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far.Story Development: 4/5The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds.Updating Stability: 5/5If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates.World Background: 4/5Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand.Overall: 4.4I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.