I liked the character development but u kept the character interaction with other characters a lot less when there are so many famous characters in Naruto and also make him a some strong Ninjutsu which is his main weak point ,as a fan of Naruto ,i liked this type of fanfic ( can u help him develop Wood release of Hashirama senju since he is his descendant, imagine the wood release along with Susanao ,it will be like second coming of Madara Uchiha when he went for fourth shinobi war with five great nations,this is just my plea as a fan)
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A book in the more unknown corners of Webnovel Eternal Thief starts leaving a decent impression on me starting with a very typical start of a cultivation novel that doesn't lean too hard into "HOW DARE YOU TRASH" tropes that Chinese novels tend to start with to try and build motivation for the reader. No, this novel gives you decent story and context for the reader to start becoming invested with the looming idea that the system is coming. The system does arrive with fanfare but the mc is hesitant to accept the cursed power at first showing some actual character. It has easy to understand themes of thievery and despair strewn throughout never asking the reader to deeply invest himself in the story but throws enough out there to keep me interested in it. The world is also rather interesting for a cultivation novel showing the humility to not have humans be ranked #1 in power and building a fully believable world filled to the brim with greedy humans vying to take the #1 in power.The weakest aspects of this story are the author's rare spelling mistakes of certain words like Warrior which he spells as Worrier and also the weakness of the character of the female lead it's not that her motivations aren't explained it's just the author doesn't introduce it the right way (mostly too fast and too reliant on hormones lol) to get me invested in the female lead beyond her attributes (looks, personality, etc.) but these are minor and I have built up a tolerance to this in lew of the things I like about it. Overall I am proud of this author for being able to hit a good bar for his first story
he is the second in comand after his father..but when he meet Sophie's mother everything change...
These patterns aren't so kind towards logic, so King Michael pushed positive thinking away and accepted the upcoming danger. But yet his nervousness was cut in half once recalling the arsenal in this room alone.
" You need to accept it, Zero " I said and kiss his now warmth lips.
of this century our technology may well reach an imaginary "super-
Heads turned when Kim walked down the hall.Her incredible long legs and of course her outstanding clothes caught everybody's attention.But it was her prowling , graceful stride and the light of vibrant energy in her face which made the attention linger. she lifted the public phone off the hook and punched in the number 'James?
O, Queen of red,
" APA MAKSUDMU. Apakah kau ingin mati ? " kata Raiser marah
5. A more evil MC who goes around pillaging and murdering and kills those 'heroes' who try to take him down (probably more of an 18+ idea as I'd love to see the darkness people can create with this MC e.g. torture and 'relationships' with females)
"We also have a kitsune." He said the last bit in a whisper that brought people in a rowdy ruckus.