As Reality Control swished its large tail, the peculiar feeling only intensified. The essences in the Flaming Star Fortress were completely unstable, they were rotting, turning slowly black.
As they reached the door, the other rooms along the corridor opened up, and men stepped out amidst gunfire and screams.
'Are girls like this!?'
1,000 years later, Way has reach the apex of a God Emperor. His Dao is not weaker than a Dao God, but it hasn't gain the Karma of Dao. His plan now is to steal the karma of dao from a Dao God and use it to advance into the Dao God realm.
More than three weeks and still counting since the last update... When a chapter is posted, it’s a satisfying long read... Wondering if they’re dropping this novel..?!
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Please try to make updation of chapters as quick as possible ...
Good read*.*this is very captivating the new kid on the block.Never judge a book by it's cover the guys in the middle of the road thought this character was a walk over I like how he approach them play innocent.They were thinking this fellow is a pushover big mistake.Dark honour great title chosen it says exactly what the title of the book is all about.If you could please unlock more chapters.
Wow... a truly spoiled and shameless mc... it matches well with the author... bwahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it a lot, I hope it continues to do a great job, I like it a lot, I hope it continues to do a great job, I like it very much, I hope it continues to do a great job, I like it very much, I hope you continue to do a great job.
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What I have gathered from reading this first few chapters is as follows. The writing quality is quite high and the story development is extremely strong. However, as is the case with most original novels on Qidian, the story flows too fast, not leaving enough time for the reader to take it all in through the large paragraphs of information. Hence I suggest making your paragraphs smaller. The character design could use a little improvement, mainly in the sense of increasing the back stories of the various characters . But the world background is also quite good and fairly fleshed out. Good job if this is your first novel, I'll be favouriting this one.