Although this is my first novel ever written on here, I believe I have outdone myself so far. Its definitely nowhere near the best; however, it has gone farther than I expected it to be. I still have plenty of ideas and many more chapters to come! If you’d like to tell me something that I can improve on in future chapters, please let me know by leaving a review below!Thanks!
Up to chapter 35 review.So first I'm going to give honest props to a self-published work that's pretty decently written especially considering that English may not be this person's primary language.I'll also say that although it seems pretty quick I generally lean towards faster powerups and faster fights. The MC definitely taking the starting strong route and keeps it blazing - and no antagonist really gives him a fight of any consequence so far.Now to the parts I don't like. While I guess I'm ok with the s*xy but not quite ultimate beauty being his first, it really felt like it went super fast. As in underage fast. More problematic is that there were then developments to show this will probably end up as a harem novel as of course his immature eyes start wandering.But then we get to Chapter 35. I don't know why this is a thing in some CN novels but it is very disturbing when now this happens at an underage level. So I'll just say it - r*ape is wrong and even more so against children. You and all the sick f*cks who love this kind of violent behavior can go to hell. I hope you find mental help before you end up in jail living out all your decadent fantasies. As for me, I'm done with this story.
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