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great title It looks like a great challenge to accept
The writing is fun and vivid, the progression in levels and skills is consistent, with each accounted for.Its plot structure and characters, the personalities, and everything, they click.Yes, they click. 10 outta 10, and better than other factory-produced creatures that pervade this place.Happy reading. Happy writing.
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Okay a novel with a good pace... For a novel in the fantasy genre with this kind of storyline and world building..I think your novel is doing fine...The events are well planned as one leads to another without been disrupted. The action pace are good and gives the readers enough time to absorb it and follow the MCs part ...What can I say. You wrote a marvelous novel here .Well done And of course... The bad side ??Little chapters...heheh scared you huh...So write more...WBravo brother...Well-done
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Its a great story if someone is into a little villainous MC.My personal favourite chapter till now has been chapter 351, Julian and Gregoria going at each other was something very exciting, it was like a challenge game going on from a proper NTR manga, I would have loved that there was expansion of that theme into the scene but no worries.Good plot, good world creation, good characters, a little more could be done on progression but overall a good read for people who like R18 fantasy novels.
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I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.
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It has a good and interesting premise, however, the sentence structures need work
Stopped reading at around chapter 270. I do understand an mc orders and goes against authority but how is it that the mc and his friends pretty much rule the world after defeating the leaders. Maybe it happens in fantasy but leaving the fate of the world in the hands of a bunch of youngsters is a total killjoy. I'm not reading anymore of this.