Great Story so far; alot of smut if you like that and each character is unique; this will suck you in for the long run. I rec that you devote legit time to this book; after the smut the plot will keep you coming back.
This novel is well written and carries the reader along.
hey, i have translate chapters up to 450 - i can share this somehow and you can add them here?I also have the same issues with genders and names - i havent cleaned them, so if you would look through them and try to clean them before uploading, it would just add the extra quality. let me know
This novel is a must read. Ive only read the first chapter and i'm already hooked, give it a try and you won't regret it
From Sand to Field: A Center-Back's Dream é uma história envolvente que mistura elementos de futebol com o mundo dos jogos e do desenvolvimento de personagens. A jornada de Cleiton, um jovem com sonhos de se tornar um grande zagueiro, é construída de maneira cativante, com desafios e missões que testam sua determinação e habilidades.O autor consegue equilibrar perfeitamente o ambiente real do futebol com o lado fantasioso do sistema de missões e recompensas, criando um mundo único onde o protagonista não só se enfrenta em campo, mas também lida com os obstáculos impostos por um sistema misterioso que o acompanha. O estilo de escrita é fluido e fácil de acompanhar, mantendo o leitor engajado a cada novo capítulo.A narrativa traz uma boa dose de ação e reflexão, com momentos de superação que fazem o público torcer por Cleiton e seus colegas. A introdução de elementos como treinos virtuais, elixires e a evolução do personagem adiciona uma camada extra de profundidade à trama.Se você é fã de histórias que misturam esportes, fantasia e desenvolvimento de personagem, From Sand to Field: A Center-Back's Dream com certeza vai te agradar.
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????it's very lovely I like mc that are 18 it's fresh it's exciting it's gripping I actually had moments where I held my breath so yea good jobMaybe update more
Though the pacing seems to be a bit fast for my usual liking, the story makes up for with the quality of its passages and writing style. The characters seems a bit of one dimensional so far, as in they revolve around the plot, but I hope the author would turn that around and twist my perspective,
I think it's good but with the good comes the bad, the MCs first subordinate, her name changes every few paragraphs If it didn't do that and the author was consistent with the names then it'd be great But it's so annoying to see the leader of the place (MCs first subordinate) have her name change from Rachel to Quinn to Sarah to others and back
Chapter 1-26 [Review]Good Things- A Simple StoryYou should always strive to create and inovate new stories but sometimes trying to make something new won't be any good, this story goes back to the basics of the classic high school harem troupes.- Good Quality WritingIgnoring the length of the chapters, the writing isn't bad or displeasing. It is enjoyable. Bad Things- Short ChaptersFor some reason the author decided to create each chapter for one event making it vary in length.
Nice book waiting for more chapters....
please continue this ficlove the MC's character