It is 5 star. Why because it is written quite well for a 1st book. The story is not rushed as you can visual the events written on it. Kodus Author Sama. Add it to library.
Its good ..I like the plot, the importance in main charectors .. i guess the the author will develop the story in a good way .. not forgetting the plot
As expected you did a great novel hun. Update more chapters and don't leave us hanging. The chapters made me cringe and I wanna see how she slapped her scumbag husband and bitch twin sister!
Beautiful starting. Absolutely love Priscilla and her little stupid charms. Never thought I would read something that wasn't fantasy, but here I am.Now to drop a well-deserved review.Waiting patiently for the next chapters...
damn I was thinking of this same plot last night guess i was too late
just starting it and it good so far keep it up
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DaaanggGreat writing✔️Great character ✔️ Great plot✔️Great lore✔️Great system✔️Great worldbuilding ✔️This book is absoluute bangeerr!!!
Based on the three chapters I've translated, I can provide some insights into the novel's qualities: 1. World-building: The author has created a rich and complex world with its own cultivation system, societal structures, and magical elements. The Great Celestial World, with its Nine Provinces and various sects and families, seems well-developed and intriguing.2. Character development: The main character, He Heng, is introduced as a reincarnated individual with memories from a previous life. This adds depth to his character and provides an interesting perspective on the new world he inhabits.3. Plot: The story quickly introduces conflict and mystery. The murder of a prominent figure, the pursuit of a hidden treasure, and He Heng's kidnapping all serve to create tension and drive the narrative forward.4. Cultivation system: The novel presents a detailed cultivation system with various realms and techniques, which is typical of the xianxia genre but seems to have some unique elements.5. Writing style: The author balances action, dialogue, and internal monologue effectively. The pacing is good, with a mix of intense scenes and moments of exposition.6. Themes: The novel touches on themes of power, longevity, and the consequences of one's actions, which are common in the genre but handled well here.7. Originality: While it incorporates many tropes common to xianxia novels, the He family's unique cultivation technique that trades combat power for longevity is an interesting twist.
Very nice work. A really good execution of the concept, and very fun so far. Except for a few mistakes in the writing, the quality is amazing. Very much looking forward to reading this!
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