carlodee
This story has a good start and good potential. I really hope mc doesn’t give up on his revenge and carries it out in a very brutal fashion. Also hope he doesn’t get saved by others and survives dangers due to his own skills
Finally find something worth reading and this is free to read
just read and try it out.. you won't regret it ???❤️
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The MC is very stupid and all the side characters are almost as useless as him. I just feel sorry for the people who paid coins to read this trash. All in all, I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.
"Remember leave and dont come back."
"Carl why are you doing this?" asked him. "Why? What do you mean 'why'?" answered me.
(Fenrir's Commentary: 'I will become even stronger...!')
Goodbye see you tomorrow i just said that to him
He had sensed the other Gods and decided to hurry up, telling the boy that he would come back when he was powerful enough to be called a true God Slayer.
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
"Subukan natin i-search sa net." Suggest ni Ark.
