I liked the story, it's very well written and the bonding between father and son is very nice, gave me a feeling of comfort, keep it up, waiting for more content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
yeah, I kinda enjoyed the storyis it harem? and is nyx in the harem? ___________________________________________________________________________
keep it up I am supporting with power stones love it I will give a proper review after you have completed 20 chapters give explanation of powers
a amazing kingdom building novel without a system for help!!!! But a smart MC
Found about this story from the authors main account(Abadom) in one of his ff, zero fate, cos i couldnt wait for a week for the ff to update. Although i havnt read it yet im pretty hopeful since all of author’s other ffs are well written and the plot is god-tier. Overall im excited to start.
I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar
Is the arnis is Filipino reference of the martial arts?Anyway, it has a great start. There is a problem actually.I guess to make this story longer is to explain the setting that would makes us/readers join in your worldBut good job! For the new writer ??
Good grammar which I really enjoy. I like the personality of all the characters and the different outlook on cultivation because I read lots of different cultivation kind of books and they’re usually very similar which makes it less enjoyable.
waite a minit wasent the Cold war after WWII so how is this world similar to that tis is more like the Middle Ages form Europe than the cold War era. I think the author needs to correct that.