a refreshing story, fast development. it's too bad still have a classic lazy writer with MC don't have any family. Don't you writer have at least a mother ?
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What do I say? The mc is clearly going to be a perverted mc with a harem. One of the first things he "accidentally" does is jam an object up a woman's *parts* and doesn't apologize at all, instead laughing. He gets a cheat item, which will very clearly make him op and stronger than any other character you see in the novel. All other characters seem very one dimensional. A supremely attractive elf (because, clearly, all female elves must be the sexiest thing to ever grace the mc's eyes) is saved by the mc and falls in love with him for no other reason, except that he "makes her life feel more complete
Don’t read this novel. The author deletes bad reviews. The latest app updates shows you when your reviews are deleted and it’s easy to go into your profile and see who deleted them. Way to go author. I left a legit review about the sh!tty parts of your book and how the MC is a total idiot and not an S-Ranker and how he makes so many stupid low IQ decisions but I guess that hurt your feelings so much that you deleted my review? Nice one. I’ve copied and pasted this review and will just repost it since you have a habit of deleting reviews. Way to play yourself you idiot. We can actually track what books delete reviews lmao. You’re so dumb. Third time he’s deleted the review.
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Story so far is great and takes place in the 1980's of Japan so it's a nice change of pace. MC doesn't show any nationalism other than some opinions on miso soup and rice, if you can even consider that nationalism. The way the system is explained and how it works is nice too. Very good overall so far.
This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer.However, I have a few issues:1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! )2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective.3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though.All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !
I thought that this will be another bad har to the rem. Got clickbaited by the cover and decided to read the sstory anyways. Main Character: 5/5, Faust Hecates was the absolute chad in term of experience and willpower. He is as badàss when the scene makes him up to be, even on the fight he is going to lose. He isnt the type that follow his meat stick either. Just like his name suggest, he follows the interpretation of Faust by Goethe, quoted: "The erudite Faust is highly successful yet dissatisfied with his life, which leads him to make a pact with the Devil at a crossroads, exchanging his soul for unlimited knowledge and worldly pleasures"This version of Faust seems to be the far far aftermath of that interpretation, and you can say that he is on his lowest state until chapter 20ish where, just like in the original Faust, decided to enter the grand scheme of the univese once again, no matter how small it is. (Tho I doubt that it will be small.)Writing Quality: 4,5/5. I can say that the author have read a lot of literature but not having english as his first language. There are errors every couple few chapters but it doesnt change the fact that the way it is written is astounding.It is also written in immersive pov, which mean that we cant fully trust the words of our own narrator, like how the early unmotivated Faust refused that he knew something despite he knew something. World Building: 5/5 god there are a lot of em, densely packed too. Some can be a bit info dumpy but fun enough to read. Supporting/Sub/Background Cast: 5/5, many of them are memorable and some can be distinguished by their way of speaking within their respective dialog. Story Complexity: REFERENCES! THERE ARE A LOT OF THEM AAAAAAAAAA- Whether they are history, fairy tale, literature, nursery rhyme, songs, poem, historical figures, folk lore, etc. Every chapter have one or two or even five of them and some can be missed because how in the actual cheescake that the author knew such thing!? Regardless, the author is new and this work is splendid. Mind you, I wrote this review at chapter 44. Whether it turns out good or bad in the future, it mostly depends on the author. Likewise, this story is a tad niche imo, so some of you might be not find it interesting. Also no, despite of the title, while the way of writing is similar to The Author's POV, the story is mostly learning on Lord of Mystery-ish. As for whether it is good as these two major title or not, it is up to you to decide.
I like how the story is shaping up. He has an OP attribute in the form of luck, which is quite unique. I can also see the improvements in your writing quality.The one thing I want to see is some kind of a rule around how his luck works. As far I have read, he doesn't seem to be lucky everywhere he goes. When does it activate? What are its limitations? Those are some of the things I would like to see.
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