للأن كل شيء جميل في القصه قرأت لأخر فصل الآن ألا و هوا الفصل 473 احداث كثيره حصلت مع كل الحماس إلا انه احس انه القصه الآن بدأت مع توسع الكاتب في العالم و درجات القوه و شرح بعض المسطلحات الجديده في القصه.
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For now, everything is beautiful in the story. I read to the last chapter now, chapter 473. Many events happened with all enthusiasm, but I feel that the story began now with the writer's expansion in the world and the degrees of strength and the explanation of some new terms in the story.
I like the way your new work is trying to go in a whole new direction and all, after it is tiring to always read about some unlucky guy trying to get revenge for being rejected by a girl. "Boy! Ain't got no manners..." How many people get rejected daily and it does not be come the highlight of their life.
Keep that up, but if the story starts developing such symptoms, I'm bailing
Honestly, it's an amazing story so far, love how everything is progressing and the attention to details in the story. I guess I am biased in hoping that the MC and his butler get together lol. Though it'd be okay if not I still like the story itself more than anything.
The book struggles a bit with some generic characters, which makes the depth of the story a bit empty, although with some solid world-building.
Solid 5 for now. I didn't see any big negative in this novel. This is my form of support to author, will revisit is again when story has been fleshed out to review again. For now, this one is a well written novel with good characters and fantasy world.
baiko wonders where is the legion honestly idk i thought the book would blow up by now but ill add my "review" here to boost stats. so far the story has been great and consistent the world building in interesting and there aren't many grammatical errors if you read rise of the undead legion your gonna enjoy thus one
The plot is interesting. The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!
Horrible. While the idea behind the story is sound, the grammar makes it hard to get into. I mean, how can you constantly go back and forth with he and she? And not realise that you're doing it?
First and foremost, this book is pret good.The story isn‘t original but it is still very enjoyable to read. I like how he wasn’t OP in the beginning (excluding his background and money), however I think he got way too OP way too fast. And the amount of money and power this background has is just too much, way too much. It‘s like everyone in the world, no matter if President of US or Queen of England could be his slave just because his grandpa is rich-rich. Still a good job Author and worth a read :).
I would have to say, This is very Good, nice plot, a whole new experience like, come on, a world of the dead? Everything is on point, however there might be a few mistakes in phrases and punctuation, which bothers me a bit, but Everything is fine! Keep up the good work author! Im awaiting the next ones!
This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10!About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes.Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this!(This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)
I have to say it's really awesome to read. Everytime I read a chapter it's getting more badass. So I can just advise go and give it a shot because it's one of the best Novels I read here so far.