it's not that bad for someone writing your first novel ?u200d? keep the good work
A really great novel with lots of historical elements that for me, who lives in Brazil and has never studied about China, is fantastic about how rich and glorious ancient China was.China has at least 4 thousand years of history, it deserves great respect.
the story is good ... keep it up guys ..
and the person we created will fight each othet, whoever survives is the winner.
Okay, I eat my food right away. "Hmmmm."
The days were peaceful... well as peaceful as they can be in forest of death with this many shinobi dying and general awfulness of some chakra signatures...'Man it almost feels like i can taste them...Ugh!!...'I got repeated information from both my clones that the basics of the timeline are preserved until now and i sighed in relief, silently plotting, 'I almost feel like i can give Obito competition by my efficiency as I move in the shadows...'
At the same time as Flint finished eating, the Chef placed a thermal box on the table in front of Flint.
As soon as she walks in and close the door behind her, Nana came crashing into her arms with a pretty cute sniffs as she warps her arms around the tallers' neck.
Somewhere inside the building
Charles walked around the school trying to get familiarize himself with the layout of the school. This school was much bigger than what he was used to. He was becoming a boarding student so that he would be able to have an easy commute to school compared to his other school which were further out into the countryside. While looking down at the map he accidently bumped into some odd-looking kids. They all had piercings in their ears and were glaring down at him. He immediately knew that they were delinquents, some of them even had scabbed over wounds on their face and arms.
Upon his arrival, he found Albert had been before him: and he was a little perplexed by this meeting; but he soon recovered himself, and expressed his opinion with much warmth to the judge. The latter shook, his head doubtingly; and although Werther urged his case with the utmost zeal, feeling, and determination in defence of his client, yet, as we may easily suppose, the judge was not much influenced by his appeal. On the contrary, he interrupted him in his address, reasoned with him seriously, and even administered a rebuke to him for becoming the advocate of a murderer. He demonstrated, that, according to this precedent, every law might be violated, and the public security utterly destroyed. He added, moreover, that in such a case he could himself do nothing, without incurring the greatest responsibility; that everything must follow in the usual course, and pursue the ordinary channel.
You'll never know if you don't go (go!)