Has this ended
May I ask in what chapter it happened?
Why jumped his spirit realm cultivation to heavenly martial realm ? What about the secret of establishing spiritual abode at spirit realm? Plot hole
Hm, at the start interesting--- middle very draggy--- towards the end become interesting again but ending felt rushed. All the side characters story neglected at the end.
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I personally like this book as this develops my imagination
The novel is good should read it but its ruin when yuna got introduce its just ruin the novel.
Grammarly Good
World Building Good
Charachter Development good
Nice storyline... It will be more nice if its chapter updates will be more frequent ...
Honestly an amazing book written about kingdom building. It’s alot like World Online but a fair bit better. The overall writing quality is excellent you can tell the author has put effort into making it an enjoyable read. Also free chapters up to 94? Sign me up yes please. I have just caught up and am so excited for what’s going to happen next. I hope you never drop this and I for one would be glad to support ur writing
everything checks out, this is a great vampire novel. It's too soon for a full review but it's a good read, especially with some of the twist I did not expect so soon into it. I won't spoil anything though, find for yourself what you like most about it
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Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it.He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat.I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.