Raoking
I've returned after finishing the novel and decided to revise my review, downgrading it from 5 stars to 3.5. Initially, I gave it top marks, appreciating its harem elements as a subtle backdrop without causing unnecessary drama, which suited my preferences.
The main storyline was captivating – the protagonist embarked on a quest to uncover the world's end and save everyone, including the characters he formed emotional connections with. The novel had numerous delightful details, but some inconsistencies left a sour taste. As a light read, it met my expectations.
However, the disappointing ending led me to reconsider my rating. The climax felt rushed, despite the buildup that kept readers engaged and tense. It seemed like an abrupt fix to provide a happy ending, rather than a satisfying conclusion. Here's a spoiler:
The story started strong, with the protagonist gathering powers and rescuing characters, hinting at a grand finale involving teamwork against the Black Dragon, similar to an Avengers-style mission. This departure from the original game plot was clichéd yet enjoyable.
Unfortunately, the protagonist suddenly became invincible, defeating the dragon easily, undermining the significance of his global connections. The dragon's threat felt diminished, and the character's disappearance resembled Thanos' snap, leading to abrupt plot developments. Time travel for the heroines during enrollment further complicated things, leaving no resolution or side stories – just an abrupt ending.
If you're seeking a casual read, you might enjoy it up until a certain point. If you're sensitive to plot twists or need a more satisfying conclusion, you might want to reconsider stopping or bracing yourself for disappointment. The turning point where the protagonist reappears with Full Frame (game protagonist) and Jelly (business elf) is where the quality takes a dip, according to the spoiler.
Ultimately, read it at your own discretion, knowing that the experience might not be entirely fulfilling for those looking for a well-rounded narrative.
The story revolves around a concept called transmigration, where the protagonist assumes the body of a character known for his extraordinary beauty that becomes almost clichéd. The narrative involves multiple characters participating in "instances" or survival challenges, where completing tasks is crucial for survival; failure leads to elimination. Let's discuss the main character (ML) next.
Though I won't reveal the identity, the ML appears to lack a distinct personality, which contrasts with the author's attempt to create complexity. His actions consist mainly of smirking and repeating annoying behaviors, initially amusing but eventually monotonous. He's neither particularly evil nor unpredictable, and his presence feels redundant after many chapters.
What irks me is the ML's persistent pursuit of the protagonist, engaging in inappropriate physical contact without consent, despite the protagonist's attempts to escape. Their relationship development seems contrived, especially since the MC's empathy towards the ML develops after a specific event involving the younger version of the ML.
Moving on to the MC, they have been diagnosed with Antisocial Personality Disorder (ASPD), which is portrayed as mild. The MC lacks empathy but occasionally helps others, though not出于善意. While the narrative shows empathy and strong emotions, it's unclear if these are genuine or just the MC convincing themselves they're heartless. The use of ASPD feels like a crutch to enhance the MC's eccentricity without exploring the disorder consistently.
The MC's abilities often border on Deus Ex Machina, with convenient solutions presented without much planning or resource gathering. The author's excessive explanation can disrupt the flow, like when a character magically obtains food during a famine or effortlessly unlocks doors.
Additionally, the story includes cringe-worthy viewer comments that detract from the immersion. Side characters lack depth and likability, similar to the main characters.
In terms of interest, the survival game premise is solid, but the主角's near-impossible success dampens potential for engaging plot development. So far, after 200 chapters, no arc has stood out.
This book might entertain someone looking for a light read, but for those seeking a well-crafted or thought-provoking story, it might be a disappointment. If horror is your preference, "The Kaleidoscope of Death" would be a better choice.
The "Lust System in the Murim World" is an intriguing blend of action, fantasy, and unexpected twists that captivates the reader from the very first chapter. The vivid portrayal of the Murim realm draws one into its rich tapestry of martial prowess and hidden desires, while the unique lust system adds a fresh, thought-provoking layer. The protagonist's journey of self-discovery and redemption keeps the pages turning, making it a compelling read for those who enjoy immersive world-building and character development. It's a rollercoaster ride of emotions and adventure that leaves a lasting impression.
The author is Chinese. I've read so many Chinese novels and most of them are bias to other countries and I can see that they really hate Japan (in novels they name Japan country R lol)
Harem but worst f-ing mf having an orgy 24/7
very fun story
Its great experience with the likes of people should be able to save himself getting drained
This is a beautiful story with an amazing happy ending. Well done author ?
just finished reading the novel, im not satisfied of the ending, like how can u end the story of d couple going to a clinic for ultrasound and finding they are going to have twins and then it says "The End". they haven't even celebrated, we didn't even witness it they're both happy and excited.......
I love it so far
i love it???
man! I can't wait! time to sacrifice my soul to get all the chapters in bulk (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
