Enemy
looking forward to the next chapter.good luck author
I think I’ve read this before, to the point where she found out she was actually misdiagnosed. When I reread it again, I seem to understand why I dropped it in the first place.
Some reviews said this story is a cliche, the world background is a cliche, but the plot seems forced to me in regards that the author made FL such a blockhead just so ML can swoop in and save the damsel in distress. Or maybe it’s a cliche but I usually gravitate towards more intelligent-independent FL, so I’m not used to this kind of FL (which might be why I dropped it before).
I reread some chapters and so far for me FL is kind of a jerk. She disappeared when she wanted to only to come back suddenly 5 years later when she wants something; expecting everything’s OK. ML is the one who is making effort for their potential relationship. She’s got a one track mind, doesn’t learn from past experiences thus kept getting schemed against by the same person again & again. She said she’s pure, but not stupid. Sweetie, sadly, the facts have proven otherwise ?
If you like Japanese stories, you would probably like this one. The story isn't bad, but it's just not my cup of tea. The MC is scared of girls and within just one chapter he steps back in fear of two different girls.
I had one problem with the writing and that was the fact that the author kept referring to the MC as "the blue haired boy" constantly long after his name was known. It wasn't just once or twice, but almost every time he was mentioned.
Writing Quality is 4 stars aside from what i mentioned.
Stability of updates is 5 stars
Story Development is 4 stars
Character design is 4 stars
World Background is 5 stars
Like I said, it was good, just not for people like me.
This is a gem of a book! Impeccable narration, brilliant penmanship, alluring synopsis and the mystery, everything blends perfectly to present an enthralling story! I am glad to have stumbled upon it! Can’t wait to read more!
The quality of the novel is good. I especially like the character of the main character. I especially like the main characters Nie Yan that he fought what he lost in his previous life and that he didn't change the quality drastically as he reached the so-called peak of life Who doesn't like the harem genre or how there are a lot of ambiguous relationships in a novel, and there is only one specific romantic relationship, then this novel is for you
Uhmm. I’m in chapter 10 so far the story is good but the translation is getting worst. It is much better in novelupdates so you can read it there.
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Good Story, overpowered protagonist, nice-nice-nice. The explanation in the chapter's is also flawless, some chapter we're even filled by just explanations.Please Improve Your Conversations ?
Very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!
There is actual science in this.The MC doesn't go back in time just because of "feelings" and "I regret this!".He actually modeled the timelines. But that's not the best part of this story, it's the character interaction. The kids, his sister.Highly recommended.
I Started Crying After reading first chapter because I felt how the female Lead is feeling.Interesting novel and I am sure that this will be the best.
Here's my obligatory 5 star review to support the authors of this genre.I was first introduced to this genre by My House of Horror. However, there aren't many good novels in this genre at the moment. Thank you very much for choosing to write in this genre Lumydee sensei sama!
