This is beyond impressive. Penmanship is awesome and mature. Well done it is one of the best work from a mystic lady. Keep up the good work and do write more.
This novel feels a lot face than usual there was no proper depth in character and too many investment and that too it was fast.
I love the writing style and I hope the author continues
This story is beautiful. Everything is amazing in the story have very little criticism about this novel. I have a question to the author are you gonna payroll and padlock the chapters? Please don’t
I don't know how to rate this right now because there is only one chapter but that one, chapter is fantastic! I can already tell by just that one chapter this story could be great! Kinda sad that the author gave up on it so soon but I hope they pick it back up! Also if you continue with this can you make it so when MC gets out of the ground he with find a spatial ring or rings with lots of amazing stuff in it/them? Or he finds a lot of heaven defying treasures? Or both? That's just a suggestion thought,you don't have to do that.
i mean i don't have to say muchbut I hope the power sys tem gets berra
really in love with this novel , I hope the author won't leave it like the precious one , looking forward to next chapters ! truly an underrated novel
I really liked ?????????this story but it has only 7 ???chapters. When is the author going to extend the story further???? please update next chapter ???
Though it's just getting started, this new novel shows a lot of promise to me. The world-building is intriguing, with hints of a rich, magical world and mysterious forces at play. The protagonist is relatable, and there’s potential for some great character development as the story progresses. The plot is off to a strong start, with enough action and suspense to keep you interested. The writing is clear and engaging, and the pacing feels just right for a beginning. I’m excited to see where this story goes.... it has all the makings of an epic fantasy adventure! Definitely one to watch. Giving all-stars to encourage the writer.
This is a gem, a top notch story really, if u r a fan od dual cultivation, god of dual cultivation, naked sword art, this baby is on par if not better in some aspects. the system is great which isnt present in the other, the author has put a lot of effort into it. the lemons r defently top notch, the story has a lot of deapth, and so does the system. the story is fun. i realy like the fights there is just enough for it be exciting, and not to much it gets boring and have u skip 10 chapter and the mc is still in the middle of his swing. the back story also comming a long and have some depth. very good wrting as well. thats all positve stuff there is a lot more. so give a try u wont be disspointed i only wish there was 2k chapters.now for the low ponts, i wont call them bad, or negtives, as they r crutual to the story and it wont work without them, but i felt that they slightly slowed down the pace. and it all has to do with the tower. now u must understand the tower is amazing, and i feel that it still has not shown its depth and how good it can become. but at the same time it has so amny paths options and specs, that at some point i think between chapter 110 to chapter 140 it slowed down the pace of the story, just by simply going thro its upgrade and gowing down its option. and everytime it feels too big when it comes up and could monoplise a huge part of the story. now that is probibly a negative only due to the format of realase of daily chapter had it been a finished novel i would not have felt that way. as i always feel anything that slowes down main story is a negative, when i have to take it a chapter or two at a time instead of a finished novel. so its not really a negative of the novel just of the format mostly. but other than that its a perfect novel.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Holy moly. I can tell this is going to be an epic adventure already. The first chapter was pretty funny. Can't wait to see those characters again. haha.