FrankOmari1095
Oh. First person pov. Nope.
Nice plot, nice story line but if you don’t want to have headaches from chapter 200+ don’t read, the writer mixed all the chapters in jumbled order, you cannot even determine the flow of the story, too much repeated chapters that it almost made me mad I had to stop half way although it pained me because the story is really nice
chapter 192... my brain hurts... this translation... hays i don't know if it is the author doing or the translator cause u should have a good brain to understand this novel....
Very intrigued to see where this will go. The writer’s sense of detail when portraying the subject is keen. My only critique might be off of how forward some of the introduction is. Keep up the great work!
One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.
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A very good translation done too much efforts have been taken instead of giving the author bad comments we must give him good comments as he tried his best
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This novel is well written, catches you right from the start, and makes you wonder what will happen next. I would say author writes lots of details and explanation to help you understand the situation.Love that it is about Alexander The Great!Only suggestion is too much information at the start may turn readers off.BUT!I suggest you give it a read! It is entertaining and fun.
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only problem are the English names they bring down the quality and disturb the flow of the storyWhy would you think that after reading Chinese novels for years we would now like English names
Different then the norm and translation is not bad at all from what I've read so far. I like the mc as he's not stupid but not some scheming genius either,
