Such a crappy translation
Thanks for telling. Then its not my cup of tea. I am tired of such novels.
What is the name of that novel please maybe I can go for that to get a full story please
Plagiarism- just the name is changed otherwise it is all same - mc is abandoned son from one of the strongest family but grew up abroad as mercenary/assassin in some secret organization then rest is the same old story- return of soldier king type
As one of my first novels in this category, this was a great start I really enjoyed the pacing as well as the characters and how they interacted with each other.
Just read it you don't even need that many chapters to find out that it's really great novel and very entertaining and the more you read it the more it gets better.
Amazing story! The best I've ever read. Writing quality- Amazing. Barely any grammatical errors. It's easy to read and understand. There's nothing I can complain about.Stability of updates- I recently just read this so I can't say much. But the author is on a hiatus(I think) so I'll just give it 5 stars.Story development- 5/5 again. The story moves along nice. It has the perfect pace and it doesn't skip over anything. Author explains the different plots very well and doesn't leave anything unanswered.Character design- 5/5 but if I could I'd rate it even higher. I've never been more attached to fictional characters in my life. Side characters are amazing they all grow. Jeremy, Jakes brother, is one of my favorites. I started off hating the guy but by the end, it made me wish for a brother like him. The way he grew and interacts with Jake is simply perfection. Don't get me started on the main family. Noah, the twins, Zeke, and the parents are all written beautifully. Finally, the main character, Jake. He grew so much throughout the story. From not interacting with anyone and being scared of people to going to a boy who's able to freely talk to people(albeit not perfectly) was amazing to watch. He's still not perfect and is still far from being 'normal', he grew a lot. But hey, who really is normal? Everyone has their quirks. And that's one thing this story is amazing at showing. World Background- Good. 5/5 for me. Other- Author if you're reading this, I want you to know how much I love this story. I would love for you to come back as soon as possible to continue this story, but I know you probably have things going on in life. I just wanted to let you know that this hands down is the best novel on this app.
I must admit that I love twisted stories. With this, I was well served! Style, characters, background, everything makes you want to know more! I'm waiting for the next chapters author! Good job! Keep it up!
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What about his journey to become an eternal??? Nooooooo. I can't accept this ending. Sequel????..............................................
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Looks like the translator changed between chapters 40 and 41. The new translator is much poorer than the original translator, which is a shame as I was really enjoying this story.I hope the translation quality of chapters 41 onwards will improve.