For someone who have read alot of novel books from the classics of HG Wells 'War of the Worlds' to the contemporary sci fi debut of Liu Cixin 'Three Body Problem', i must say this writer has a very promising career ahead of him. From Character developments to the vivid details of the environment, nothing is left out in the writing. Of course, the plot is intriguing and will surely leave the readers spellbound. Cant wait for the next chapter to be released!
very little of the book has been uplaoded and it is very interesting tbh. I didnt expect it to be this honest but the name of the book was very intriguing and I would definitely read more!
Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
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I do enjoy the novel but the update stability is so slow.
this is a really fun novel lol can't wait for more
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MC is op, adapts fast , knows his way around women , good plot line , story spans across many worlds which is very good , has harem which is excellent overall nice novel but why are there no updates for this novel Author ???
The story seems interesting and the different povs are somewhat refreshing. Good thing that the moments when the pov changes are marked clearly, as otherwise it could be very confusing.Whish there were more chapters to read through!
Stopped reading around Chp 165This book is pretty interesting. I was actually hooked for a little bit but there are some cons that really disrupt the experience for me.The main thing is that the mysteries are a bit exasperating. The mysteries keep building at the worst times; some people may not mind this but i find it a bit annoying because it interupts my understanding of the MC and his emotions or gives me the impression that hes overly emotional or weak willed. Most of the time when the weird random stuff happen, he doesnt give it too much thought or tries to analyze things intricately. Personally, i just felt he could do a lot more. Overall, your story premise is very good and entertaining. Ive been enjoying the story so far.One thing i would like to add to improve the story is to make the MC more focused, analytical, relentless and less clueless in finding out what really happened to his brother. Lastly, you should tone down the mystery and randomness of the events or increase the time interval between them. We need more of the MMORPG feel and less of the Murder mystery feel.
The author has grown since his previous work Top Star which can be seen in this book. The build-up and pace of the story are nice and it has the yandere tag. I am also an author of the book- Transferred to the Monster World you can give it a try .