Great! I like the story and the characters! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Rather interesting story that suffers a lot from poor writing quality. Story would benefit a lot if it followed the standard dialogue format instead of this abomination that it currently has. It also has wrong spelled names and misused pronouns that is pretty common in this platform. Anyway if you can get past those story has potential.
I was scrolling webnovel ranking to find a new novel to read but I didn't find my liking. I was wondering what to read and I was recommend to This. I did not have high expectations but its good..
i love your beginning, a nice introduction. your book really piqued my interest in the very beginning but I'm gonna complain about long paragraphs.otherwise, your work shows the effort put into it.
Biased review, since I am the authorAlso, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.
I really love this story, especially with no major misunderstandings between the fl and ml.
Guys, author of this novel here. I would like to explain what you can expect from this book and some bad and good things on the same. Some good points to expect:MC is smart. he is not the smartest person in the room but when he comes out of it, he will be. I have already drafted all the arcs, so there is no confusion on my side about the character development and pacing of the story. So you won't be finding a dead story anytime soon.world building and power system is unique and a bit complicated but once you understand it, it's going to be fun.Some bad things?In the first two volumes, you may find MC a bit annoying in certain situations because of certain reasons you will understand as you read. There will be some prose issue for the first few chapters as I try to adjust to this platform This is my first book so I am still trying to get used to the dialogue structure and smooth flow that as a reader, I would love to see. This is for Pros and Cons. Now, I just want to request my readers to leave comments and rate the novel. I know it's hard to do that for a book with just 2 chapters but I hope you will be able to do that after 10? or maybe 20 chapters? I will be trying to keep this book free for as long as possible do comments really are the motivation I dearly need? you also don't have to worry about criticising my work and putting your opinions. Hopefully you enjoy my work? Have a good day
Good job for starting the new book~ (≧∇≦)b surely going to be interesting just like the others! Congrats and have fun writing! The review: The story is quite interesting with the unique concept of reincarnation but not as an extra, villain, or the protagonist—but a character that wasn't supposed to exist anymore. The MC is a science guy and yet he didn't have that crisis about "oh no but this is illogical!" The cur.ses will most likely remind you of JJK ?u200d↕️ the start is good, although it had many information that if you skim, it's a little bit hard to register. I love it when the something like [The cursed energy is showing interest in you], I definitely will read more ♡＾▽＾♡
Good writing, but first chapter was kinda boring, the premise is very unique. I still don't have strong feelings about the main character but. So far everything is still good ?
I absolutely love it but I hate some of the characters especially the ladies.like what the hell , can’t the mc just one girl following him around.this ain’t a harem novel.and I absolutely hate the girl yua.she just sees the mc at the and just start blushing.and waste of all roan ends up taking her home.this is a great novel but please specify coz some of us don’t like clingy people
So far, the story is good. It's not too slow or too fast, and I like the characters. I also quite enjoy the world setting. However, we still need to see if the quality remains consistent.
it seems like a wish fulfilment novel and i love it.