Solid writing and story with a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall it’ a great story so far, well done
I must say the story line is great. I love the idea of a dungeon-style cultivation novel. I don't think I have read anything like it before. The only downside I have seen so far is the grammar, a bit. I see you use present tense and not past tense a lot. That affects reading as I feel that the way the MC is talking isn't right. Maybe use past tense in the future. Other than that, I like it. Keep up the good work.
it is a great book and the write really knows what their doing
Deym it actually hooked me right from the beginning especially that this type of genre is my cup of tea! I definitely recommend it!
I love a book like this, but you need to tell me more about the background
This novel is not what I expected, and I've only read 10 chapters (which also means this review doesn't have any spoilers past what could already be inferred from the synopsis). First off, writing quality - the language is sophisticated but readable, with vivid descriptions. It has a natural flow that quite literally had me raving out loud about it - I'm a sucker for good quality writing. Story development, I can't say much about for the time being, similar with update consistency, but I've given them 5 stars because if this novel continues as it is now, it is absolutely deserving of them. The character design struck me from the first chapter, because it feels genuine! The dialogue is natural, the actions seem as though a real person might make them. Sure, there's occasionaly what I'd consider a 'movie action' which is slightly more... cheesy than what would be real, but the most important thing is that it doesn't break the immersion. Finally, the world building is disgustingly good. Mixture of ancient and modern settings... this is an incredible story! I'm honestly enamoured by it, so kudos to the author! You've done amazing
The book is good but sto is freash like lemon and when you squeez the lemon you can enjoy the juice rest of the day and then you go to bed again for your birthday cake ertry
I am hocked to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am dying with curiosity of what will happen next. Hearts and more hearts, this is just too good❤❤?❤?❤?❤??❤???❤❤?????
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Might read, added to library.
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
mc a simp and that alone makes me hate the novel and if you wondering why I gave it 5 star is because author deletes reviews that show the bad side of his work