It's a good start and the grammar isn't too bad. The chapters are a decent length and the ending of the first chapter does make you want to keep reading. It tends to Tell vs Show quite a bit, but that's easy to fix and should resolve as the author really gets into the heads/mannerisms of their characters.
From my point of view the story revolves around Tasha.However it’s kind of taking time like it’s so slow.But I’m enjoying it because it contains real content. Someone can absolutely relate to some of the events in the book also I’m not a fan of fantasy this is my kind of story. I would want to read more of this story and I’m glad that it’s still ongoing.
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The first chapter was amazing ???, looking forward to the rest
Embark on a ruthless journey of vengeance and survival as a broken hero rises from the shadows, facing dark trials and forbidden desires. Unmissable! ???
This story is really good. I like how u jump from different perspectives which is uncommon in a lot of Novels. Love your power system and I really like ur main character Conrad and I can’t wait to see his development
While the book is funny, the author's notes are funnier. This should not be true, especially when the author has writing talent that far exceeds almost anything I've seen. In the past, sure, it was good, but now that the author (who is a good friend of mine) has ended most of the Shadow Wizard Money Gang, whom I thought would be more of a challenge, the chapter quality has gone down significantly, and I therefore give this book a 3.6. Do more better, Termina.
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Hey, you! Yeah, you, who is looking at the reviews to see if the people liked, so you can decide if you will give it a try or not. Yes, you! GO READ THIS SHIT NOW, I SWEAR YOU WON'T REGRET. Bloody-heeeell, this is really good, I have to say it. Ann-nim, you smash it, you really got it. From the cute dedication to the characters info and to the chapters... you got it. I felt locked in the story until the end, and I laugh out loud too. I'm really anxious about the next chapters, tbh. Idk how you didn't reach 100K yet, cuz this is incredible. I loved the way you write, really, it's fluid and refreshing. You made me love almost all the characters who have appeared until now and some who u just mentioned. You made me hate the scumbags who have appeared until now too lmao, and it's so cool. So guys, just go and read it, you don't know what you're missing.
Awesome Read. Can’t get enough of Jovana and Caspian.❤️?
Great story, fleshed out characters I am so glad i decided to search by "Mordred" or I may have never found it.