Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Hey, so I started reading this new story, and it's pretty good! It's a romantic fantasy, and the main characters are really interesting. The plot has a lot of potential, and I can see it becoming even better if the author develops it well. I gave it 4 stars for now since it has a few cliches that I'm particularly not a fan of, and I also noted some parts that repeat themselves a bit. It's not a big deal, but it could be smoother. Oh, and this is the author's first book, so I'm trying to be fair. I'll keep reading and see how it goes. Maybe I'll update my review later with more details or a different rating.
Everything hooked me in 7 chapterOp villain mc with strong allies like overlord. Look forward for more!
Author here, This is my first novel so sorry if it’s not greatest but I want more sport system novels and because I couldn’t see them, I decided to do it myself. I appreciate any helpful comments
The overall writing needs some work, yet the story is new and interesting. Having his class as builder is something new. Hope you keep updating!
Immediately I sit down and prepared my cherry smile to greet him. "Hi Writerz."
The chair electrocute me and shocked me. "Okay, Carl, do you remember anything now?"
Never! Never!
This night signing did not stop at all for the first time; it gave the girl a calm and deep sleep, but terrified the villagers.
That's when I thought that maybe if my descendant found true love together with someone, then
Cell #69's face went slightly red, then melted into a perverted expression.
" Ah terima kasih untuk itu dan juga maaf soal yang tadi, aku hanya marah sebentar " kataku tersenyum kepadanya dan dia sedikit memerah