I didn’t know if I could review twice, but I just had to try! Thank you author!
Sorry in adavance cause am reviewing for FP
after reading it for 3 months I can confidently say that this series is one of my favorites... tho it's still not for soft stomach it's really epic and unique imo, don't get dissapointed from first few chapters. at least read the unlocked chapters before rating honestly :) I hope it's gets more hype.
good premise. normally the protagonist uses this type of system to gain power and then do good. this is clearly not the case.
It's a well thought up story! The interactions, the world background, the characters, all of them are interesting! The first chapter might be a bit short, but it improves the more you go! I had fun reading through it!
This is very intriguing, you're doing well. Love the descriptions, Haibo, very demure, very cutesy, very mindful. The Male lead is on fire, the female lead dey hot. The plot is given, a very good story line
A well-written story, one that manages to get me somewhat excited to read even if I have no idea about half of the sports terms. There's good potential here and I'd like to see a bit more of how the pressure to perform can bring out other traumas, especially since the MC is carrying some pretty significant traumatic events.A small primer on relevant football terms would be helpful, something at the beginning I could reference back to.
Everything is amazing, the writing is realistic and allows a reader to follow the MC's train of thought. The characters also react in mannerisms that are also realistic, hunting prey, safe areas vs not ready to go there, holding grudges for fitting acts, a realistic form of PTSD, the MC isn't full of main character syndrome, bartering in shops.The stability of updates is absolutely consistent, there is almost always 1, sometimes 2, chapters a day, the releases are enough that I can always come back at least once a day to read more about my favorite owls.The story development is smooth and flows from each area to the next in a way that helps understand the transitions from 1 arc to the next, an example being from hatchling to the ruins. (Keeping vague so as to avoid spoilers.)Character design is peak quality in that the history constantly shapes how the characters react, and when parts are shared, with others, the reactions from others are reasonable and make even some background characters feel more 3 dimensional.As for world background, it's slowly expanding in much the same way our main owl discovers new things, every new discovery makes me happier as I see her explore more and see more things.Overall 11/10Gimmie more owl.
The writing is normal, not bad, not necessarily good either. I would suggest you focus on short paragraphs, maybe add more life to the actions and character, it's good to feel the immersion. then last point, where's the synopsis and the tag? maybe it's my app that has a bug, but I don't see them anywhere
this is amazing!, One of my favorite web novels and I cannot put it down.
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