PLEASE NOTE: This is a preliminary review and its contents do not describe any existing content of this series. This review was posted prior to the publishing of the first chapter. Star ratings are not applicable to the sereis as of now and will simply be between 1-2 stars depending on what we have been given to work with.Oh, hello! Didn’t see you there. I was just thinking about how insane the number a hundred million items would be. I mean think about it, even if the character used 50 scrolls (assuming they are consumable) every single day, he would have enough to last him at least 5,000 years.If they aren’t consumable and are indeed meant to summon some sort of creature, (while I believe would be unlikely due to the fact that such a game which would allow such a high number to build up would be unbalanced) then if he used the scrolls whenever he absolutely had to, he could essentially have enough scrolls for at least double to triple that initial estimate.In regards to the premise of the character, I think this concept would be fairly pleasant as long he doesn’t end up a sorry, sentimental sap of a doormat (you know, those repulsive hero types). That or he establishes a romance or harem. As long as those two taboos are avoided, the premise of a hoarder seems pretty interesting. I expect a hilariously selfish, calculating, shameless person who would not hesitate to cut down a future threat, even if it is their own relatives.I hope this lives up to my expectations.
This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? CheckGreat characters? CheckYou want a lively world and great world building? Check tooFor anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
A not-so shameless author review here! Let's go straight to the point, first of all, the book is filled with info dumps, that much I can say but the premium chaps have so much lesser than the free ones, you can say that it's some kind of growth in my part as an author. Second, I made a huge blunder of including 20+ chaps of backstory on the main storyline, I know, it ruined the reader's immersive experience with the MC in the story, and I am truly apologetic for that as I indeed regret doing such a thing, if only I could go back in time then I would've uploaded them on a separate volume instead, what a pity! Third, as of now, I am still working to the best of my abilities to improve myself as an author and I think you would be able to see these improvements if you read on? Not entirely sure though, hehe. Finally, the author is super lazy and often procrastinates in socmed to relieve boredom and avoid their writing responsibilities, so if you happen to have socmeds as well, why not motivate(scold) me there by dm'ing one of my accounts? That's all, take care and happy reading!
This is actually enjoyable i hope that it will still be translated. Although there are some weird lines and the mc's personality is bland sometimes act like a stupid kid. The world related to WOW is really enjoyable. The mechanics and the exploration plus the way the story revolves like a bunch of RPG side quest is really good. Hope to read more of this.
Very good writing quality but very poor story design . There is no sense of anticipation in the first half of the story because of the synopsis.
The story is good and I would love to read more of it
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It's a great novel depending on your taste. I like It very much, and think It's a really good read. I'm still at chapter 26 but I'll see If it stays good.
I really hope this isn't another generic novel..... Sigh can't we get some more unique stuff? It could be a good one if the main character's life story is a tragedy and he actually develops into a good character but whatever...
Why does everything have to be so huge? It makes absolutely no sense. The golden horned beast is supposedly 400km tall, doesn't that just seem ridiculously needless? 400m would be enough and is a much more relatable height. I can't fucking imagine 400km. I can't imagine being next to something 400km tall. Hell, it's actually impossible to see the entire 400km fucking thing at once. Fucking imagine you're standing in space as a 1.8m tall human(Luo Feng), talking or looking at a being that's 400 km tall. It just makes no fucking sense. That's a fucking sixth of Pluto's diameter. It's basically a very small (dwarf) planet. Now imagine you're this small human standing on this planet. You're pretty much invisible, can't be spotted. So how would a fucking 400km tall beast ever put anybody into its eyes? Then there's the fact that the author can't keep his world building straight. First, it's said that space rings can't contain living things. Sure, I'll go for that. But then Luo Feng puts the mother nest inside his internal world, despite not being sector lord in his main body yet and no-one fucking questions it. According to the story, he can't put it in his space ring, so Dylan would know he didn't do that. But hey, my dude Dylan also "knows" he doesn't have an internal world. SO HOW THE FUCK DOES HE STORE THAT SHIT WITH NO-ONE QUESTIONING IT? And why the **** do we spend so much time on upgrading the golden-horned beast when in the 670 chapters I've read so far it's barely been used at ALL. It's only appeared for a few chapters and I'm pretty sure that was 300+ chapters ago. No need for all this filler. Also, for a supposed sci-fi space story, the world building is very surface level. I'll give a few examples. 1. Apparently, the human universe is using the length of earth's days as the most common measurement. Why? 2. The constant references within the story like "Gold are as strong and piercing as the sun" make even less sense. The sun? Earth is a fucking irrelevant planet within the universe, why would this be a common saying? There are many other cases like this too. 3. There are so many Chinese names despite the author's intention to portray the universe as a multicultural thing. 4. Apparently, China's mental training is fucking amazing hey-ho and barely anyone else does mental training unless they're a high level undying. Wtf my dudes??? With the universe portrayed as this GIANT thing with trillions of humans in a single galaxy of which there are trillions more. Why wouldn't mental training be more developed and common? Isn't it unlikely that an aboriginal irrelevant planet would have some of the most advanced stuff in this regard? Really doesn't make sense in the context of the story. Oh yeah and a final tip for you translator. Write 120 million instead of 1.2 hundred million. Oh, and when you actually do it that way, write 910 million instead of 910 hundred million. Oh, whoever's editing this might wanna step up. Like there are some serious issues in pretty much every single chapter with wrong tenses, words, misspellings etc. Like names are actually sometimes spelled 3-4 different ways in 1 chapter alone.
This is exactly what a reader dreams of, a story that they can live and breathe in. Feel the tension and turmoil, the bliss and the love. The story progresses nicely and the characters are beautifully written. LOVE IT!
Library of Heaven's Path was excellent, so in trusting the author I'll vote his next novel highly to boot. The first few chapters are well written, so it should be worth checking out.