Amazing first introductory chapters, I'm already hooked. I hope the author can keep this flow up and empties his stack soon, cause I really can't wait
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I don't really like action novels but this one actually had me hooked, it has a unique storytelling. I hope to see great things from the novel and the author.
Author you're toying with my emotions. Ian keeps pushing me to the edge!!
Not bad so far, just started. Looking forward to more ?
Very interesting concept and very nice overall. Looking forward to more chapters ?. Wish you the best author and keep delivering like this !
Absolutely freaking love this novel enough to give a review which i do rarely, ok the main reason is that I don't know what to write but anyway I love it.
Hey there, author here xDIf you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here!1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me.2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know.3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day.4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.
good start, have to wait for more chapters
story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see
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Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?