So the story is pretty good so far while I’m at chapter 55. The pacing is nice, the skills seem interesting, and it looks like there is a lot of potential for world building. That being said, it seems to be heading in a direction that makes me feel like I might drop it soon sadly. I’ll list the pros and cons belowPros:-Good pacing-Cool abilities-OP protagonist, if you’re into that-Only about 120~ chapters are in VR, then it goes to real-world (from what I have seen)-Interesting power system of gods and blessingsCons: -Grammar is fine most of the time, weird at other times, and occasionally requires you to read something a few times to understand -A few plot holes-Some illogical power scaling- the Romance (this is making me think about dropping) This will be more detailed as it’s my biggest issue so far. So far, the female lead serve to do 3 things: blush when the MC says something, stutter when interacting with the MC, and receive things from the MC…im not exaggerating. Her unique class, her equipment, her summons, her spells, all from the MC. She is useless 99+% of the time and it’s to the point where the main female side character, who hasn’t gotten as much screen time, is more persuasive as a love interest (no harem confirmed so all hope is lost ?). To top it off, the MC changes his whole personality when he is with her. About 18 of the 55 chapters I’ve read so far has been centered around them together so there is that… I’ll try some more chapters but it’s not looking good. The worst part is, I feel this behavoiur will get worse when it switches from VR to real life.TLDR: Pretty decent so far, not too many errors but they are apparent, the romance is ruining the story and unless something changes, I’ll probably drop.
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Just the start of the story shows their is great to come. Imma wait to see the story future. What's planned in it and what will go on. No one should stop reading this.
At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.
Really stands out to the rest of the sci-fi novels I've read so far. The system, although not seen much, seems pretty interesting. Worldbuilding is superb too with how it was fully explained by the author. I'll be adding this to my library and continue reading. :>
After 550 chapters:There are some unrealistic scenarios and a little too much stories with not Mc's POV, but overall u would enjoy reading this novel
I really like the novel. Sure it looks like some other big novels out there, but it's only at the beginning. The more the story is advancing, the more it changes and the more I like the story. (｡♡‿♡｡)
I love this story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Author, don't even think about abandoning this story or I will be mad. ????????????????
This story has a similar premise to how we've seen before of VRMMOs and the journey of a hero through it. There's enough of a mystery there to keep you reading while also making the world of the VRMMO interesting enough that you want to learn more. The characters have plenty of room to grow, which is good for a story. Can't wait to see more as it comes out.
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the auther tries his best to make it every thing ground breaking. right from the start.he doesn't has experience.I good story plot. but it is ruined by how impatient the auther was. moreover you are really in a hurry ..the starting is messed. it destroys the taste of the reader.rewrite that. if you want to ensure that people open their wallet for you.