Dropped after 5 chapters. My main reason for dropping is, too many unnecessary sentences, showing mental thought of mc. Unnecessarily increasing the word count by at least 4 times. All that stuff of 5 chapters could have been done in one chapter of same length.
Interesting writing. There are lots of characters and world buildings that might be a challenge to follow at times. But the story keeps me going. Will continue reading
Get to writing!!! you got me addicted, I NEED MORE!!!
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First thing I'll say is 100% worth a read!..An amazing story, very high quality of writing with only a few mistakes. Very much a story with an OP character however as with many the enemy's scale well allowing a continued battle throughout the story, with many feeling like they could lose. There's one or two places where small parts seem to be forgotten but not too important to the overall story. Interesting storyline with both the in game and in real life.Go read it and enjoy!
Within 2 chapters I've dropped this, this is a new record for the fastest I've dropped something so horay, anyway onto the review. The MC is genuinely one of the dumbest living creatures I've ever read about. So basically he can either pick 100 weak pills or 1 really good magical pill and despite the obviously better choice being the really good pill (since he's alone and probably will be for most of the novel) he chose the 100 pills and used 50 of them to heal his broken meridians. People this dumb do not deserve to be happy or angry or sad they deserve nothing to feel nothing and to recieve nothing.
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Chinese name: 地球人实在太凶猛了Chapters: 450(ongoing)Start Date: 20/04Author's other works: Forty Millenniums of Cultivation, Genre: Science fiction.
https://***.uukanshu.com/b/114371/ Link address for anyone wanting to see the raw, the book itself is good, but I dislike the translations, look at the first chapter of the raw for context, but its because they started out calling him eve, when that wasn't the name first given to him, and the translator also keeps refering to him as He, when a few lines later in the very first chapter, Google Translate says her, and Im pretty sure that isn't an error given how she has titles like Mother God of elves in this tl and Mother nature in the raws, plus Goddess of life.Point is it just feels strange and disconnected.
A story with an interesting story arc with a dark and depressing undertone in it.Jason is an interesting protagonist to read, his backstory was dark and compelling but he kinda gave me that ‘guy-who-always-gets-the-ladies’ vibes. Jason has a personality, which some writers tend to forget to add. Alina took me a while to like, it’s probably because I found her POV a bit cliché but like Jason, she has personality and quirks. I’m actually curious if this is Harem or not, I lost count re-checking the tags just to see if it was a harem. The side characters were decent, I like how Michelle has a great personality, and usually, some writers ignore the side characters and don’t even bother making them real and relatable.I love the world-building, the writer took the time to make the story tangible and real. It was exciting and it made me want to ask for more. I was curious how the world works and I love every minute of it. The story does feel like a manuscript (especially reading Alina’s POV), it felt like I was reading a script. There were more dialogues than paragraphs. There were some parts it kind of feel like cheesy but I didn’t mind at all. The story is full of flashbacks, it sucks that Webnovel doesn’t have formatting styles here because I got confused when suddenly I’m reading a backstory without any warning. Some chapters were short, so it kind of threw me off, the story does have that ‘anime’ ambiance to it. I could visualize some scenes especially when it comes to reading Jason’s POV, which I’m totally happy about it since my mind usually takes a while to see the story. I love your cover! But I’m a graphic designer ??? a font hoe. I couldn’t help myself but suggest, using a serif font because it makes the cover more elegant, serious, and formal. Condensed serif font would work. If you want I could suggest some fonts to use.Overall, this story is worth reading especially, if the reader is into anime and urban fantasy with immersive story arc.
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Gambit of the Living Weapon is a book of fiction by Breno_Ranyere. Personally, I love the main character and the fact the weapon the protagonist has is a crossbow rather than some enchanting sword or anything similar to this. The other characters are lovable, one that would make readers remember their name even if the book is finished.I've two major flaws that I've found while reading this book, scenes and punctuation. i'm not going to judge your grammar anymore since it's good. The basic principles and fundamentals, I could see that they're followed. Alright, the scenes! When it comes to this part, there were times when my excitement was building up then suddenly the action ends right away. It's a bit too fast if you were to ask me. As for the emotions, I would suggest that you add more feelings rather than using adjectives but don't overdo them. For the descriptions, the best advice I could give you is to add more emotions and actions to prolong it. I will give an example:Quietude succumbed to his mind, draining every emotion. Yes, descriptive, but we could add more emotions and descriptions to this."Once the quietness arrived, it stayed and spread in Estha. It reached out of his head and enfolded him in its swampy arms…sent its stealthy, suckered tentacles inching along the insides of his skull, hoovering the knolls and dells of his memory, dislodging old sentences, whisking them off the tip of his tongue"A little warning though, only use it during important scenes such as the action because too much will consider your book as "overdescriptive"Next, the punctuation. Punctuation is one thing authors must learn about since it helps when it comes to telling the readers when to pause or how to read that particular sentence. Try reading these sentences:As promised I will give back your money. As promised, I will give back your money.The second sentence has a comma! When one would read the first, they would go straight out without pausing. When one would read the second, there would be a slight pause after the word promise. I know learning punctuation is a difficult task, trust me, I've been there. If I can, you can too! I'll be rooting for you! Overall, it's great! All the author has to improve on is his punctuation and scenes.