Just fantastic and fabulous novel. The chapters sink in so great. Though it feels like the story hasn't taken a turn yet. It's calm. It makes me think that it is gonna be a long journey. Love ya.
i will tell the good and the bad thing about this fic.the good :+ premise story and plot development is interesting.+ mc is cool and reasonable, not cocky, not perverted, his sole goal so far is to protect his siblings. + Issei undergone traumatic event's so he mature early not indulging his perverted hobby instead he become protective to his family and trying his best to grow stronger to reach that goalthe bad :-way too many unnecessary OCs. issei sister, asia brother, loki and the gang. they become more important than canon characters. is there a point to read DxD fanfic if the main story is filled with non-DxD characters? you decide, but i personally rather read original novel instead if there is too many OCs-mc is your perfect human, your gary stu, this kind of character is the worst character because such human is not possible. human is human because they are flawed or have vice, otherwise they just fairy tale angel. the story still early so maybe he have flaw or vice in the future. - Grammar is awful. pronoun is all wrong. the fic often use "he" pronoun for female characters or vice versa. the fic use "brother" for female character or vice versa. the fic use "hyoudou brother" for referring issei and his sister. it's quite clear that the author just use google translate and wont bother to proofread it. for author : use "hyoudou sibling" next timei think this fic have potential but the awful translation makes it unreadable. and the so many OCs fill the story to the point shifting out Canon characters is making me dont care about the story anymore. it's tough to read
I'm happy I gave this book ? a chance. I can't wait for the story twist fingers crossed ? ? ❤️ ? ? ? ♥️ ? ❤️ ? ? ? ♥️ ? ❤️ ? ?
Got me glued from the start...Can't wait for the rest
good novel that have very good idea ....
Very good start and the ability is also very creative. I am looking forward to more chapters, it is one of the best upcoming novels from i have read.
Let's goooo, hambino, I believe this novel can do it for you. ?
This book is very interesting! ? I really like the writing style and also love the characters.if you're looking for a spicy romance book, this is it ?.I don't know but i just love Ace and Ovelia together
Hi, Moe!I just found this story some days ago and i'm really enjoying it. I've read up to chapter 44.As a non english native speaker, i can't speak about the technical aspects of the narrative since my knowledge in that side of the english grammar is quite limited but i pretty much like the other points as the plot and characters developments, the worldbuilding, the characters interactions... Keep doing such a great job.
Bro fr just stole the translation from my site Xennovel and uploaded it here... Impressive. Never met a more shameless user. For clarification the rest of the raws are unobtainable at the moment thus it hasn't been finished.
As the author, I will obviously give it a 5 stars coz I love this genre xDAnd I am pretty sure I won't end up messing this up hahaEitherways, shoot any questions you may have!
author are you going to drop your previous workq