Two very familiar powers called out to me from my living room, and I was forced to wretch myself to some semblance of awareness as falling back asleep now wouldn't be productive for my health. I was in the process of locating both of my weapons when a small head of pink and brown hair poked into my doorway. Mismatched eyes met my own, and the owner gave me the most innocent of smiles before pointing over to my closet.
Toby smiled for a second knowing that he had just made this older woman's day with just asking her a simple question that had no real bearing on his life in any way. As he looked at her she ushered him inside knowing that is he didn't hurry out the door then Katlyn would be on her way up. She pointed out the suit that he had wanted to have laid out for the day and she hustled away.
"I don't know. I only pushed her a little, but she just fell." Karl replied in a calm tone. The girl became irritated by it.
"He told you to pack the sanitary pads and even shaving cream?" Tian giggled at the thought of him instructing the maids. The maids just look at each other in confusion.
"Huff!" I choked as I gasped for air my body dangling from a large mountainous cliffside. Fortunately, a few vines had kept me from falling to my death, unfortunately, some of them were wrapped around my neck restricting my airway. "Damn" I gasped coming back to my senses. Managing to rip away a few of the vines from my neck only to find, these vines were the very ones that support my body from a short trip off the side of an endless abyss.
The impact crushed the lunging Blue Ant killing it instantly as it was swept away by the river along with the headless carcass of the Blue Ant Jack tossed away.
Bell despite is curiosity didn't comment. Aren dragged Bell with him to the library for the rest of the day while Harry and Ron were playing with Harrys Broom, Aren shivered in thought. It would have been amusing to make sexual jokes if they weren't brats still wearing diapers.
Other than a proofreader or a little more self editing not much else to do but really I only spot 1 or 2 mistakes/misspellings that don't really affect much. Overall it is very well done and a great read.Grammarly extension may help to but again these are really minor mistakes hardly worth mentioning. However if it was me I would have wanted to know. Once again keep up the great work I look forward to the next chapter.
(Sky) "Why?"
As soon as they arrived in Liaoping, Qin Fuhua wasted no time in escorting Suyin to his manor, ensuring her safety before embarking on his mission to uncover the truth behind the mysterious key.
"Nnn, I am sure. Please, process the procedure to take these quests."
"The guy who was asked you on a date and you "almost" stuffed him in your trunk??" Tiang was stating it as a matter of fact for which Sara nodded agreeing to his words.