JackPriper6pk
I read until the free chapters.I enjoy it at start because mc kind of smart even though there's no world introduction where things just keep popping up all a sudden superpower,magic, cultivation, system and rift etc. It lacks world building but still entertaining until the flaw start showing up when he awakened where too much ranting/monolugue happen.MC biggest trait as smart all of a sudden turning to idiot where all his secret and explaining how it works one by one to his best friend even considering telling the system and his cheat until he understand it how much of a idiot he is? For the all people he should understand how to be cautios because how people treat him even betrayed by his childhood friend. This destroy the novel to me. author changing his Character from smart to idiot for a plot there is no stability. I mean he can make a mistake but not like this this is idiocy to the higher level.Then. Even villain want to kill mc because color of hair. LOLI can only rraise it 3.5/5.0
not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew
It has a concept similar to The World Online and even almost the same name, but it is very different, different gameplay. I liked it a lot, I hope more, I found some small bugs, but nothing that makes me go down to 4 stars, could there be zombie players in the future? By being infected while connected and the zombie's mind would still stay connected.
great book. and believe me this novel is just getting better and better. so don't let yourself stop at some 10 or 20 chp. good stuff begins afterwards. mc is growing and changing.I say try later chp, in case you think you are gonna drop. maybe that will stop you ??
This ongoing WebNovel is a must-read for anyone who loves a good story. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so immersive that I'm constantly captivated by the story. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally, and the ongoing nature of the story only adds to the excitement and anticipation. I highly recommend this WebNovel!
For some reason my old review got deleted so i ll repeat myself. The novel starts out fine but at one point the author decides to have the mc suddenly become a killer(to add drama or smthin i guess). Completely kills the whole atmosphere the novel built up and ruins the story. No idea why there are so many positive reviews because the last time i wrote this the novel was rated well below 4*.
I had high hopes for this story, but the further I read the more dissapointed I became with the System, the god behind it, and the main character. Not only does the system provide no help, it charges him money at every corner just to nickel and dime him, he’s provided no basic amenities or knowledge to survive in a world extremely unlike our own and is then berated nonstop for understanding nothing.
Loving the book so far Please keep doing more as this is my favourite now And I'm hooked I cant wait till you release more chapters Keep up the good work
Love it(☆▽☆) nice explaining (☆▽☆) everything is perfect (☆▽☆) great action thing (☆▽☆) in summary everything is fabulous (。•̀ᴗ-)✧ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
the story is so good, i kept on reading it. From the characters, the plot, the wordings, everything is just so in sync. i hope that the author keep on writing good stories. thank you for this story.
overall nice read :)story is going really smoothly (as far as i read), and although it's relatively calm pace i enjoy reading it.maybe not to the point of binge reading (as it's setting its own pace) it in one go, but definitely reading it whenever you feel like it and want to relax :)
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