I haven't read the book but the name alone made my day weldone author keep it up????????????????????sarangayor ?????
I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.
Love the book especially the female character. I’m just waiting for the next chapter. It been 13 days since they updated. Please send more.
I am really anticipating what’s to come! Keep it up! So far so good! ??
As an unapologetic author, I decided to give my own book a review because, well, I'm totally into it. I couldn't care less if it's your cup of tea or not. Just vibe with it if it's your jam, and if it's not, then bounce. No judgment here.??✌️?
Currently Jesseca's suspect is being arrasted, Jesseca can be entangled in the Constitution 5491 paragraph 2 which contains' Whoever makes other people toxid will be suffer.
"give it back!" growled Shadow. he was trying to push down the thought of attacking. ruled #1, don't get into fights... it will only cause more drama and trouble.
Meanwhile with Superboy and Robin
Hoshi is waiting at the door and asked me if i can hangout with him sometimes
Allen and Aria kept silent for they think that they would miss her…
"Angrod, I have to tell you something." -Celes
[Magic] Spark