it started good then dropped for a bit then became better later, it's a usual wish fulfilment novel. The only thing I don't like is how he's only able to pick up girls using money.
Overall, a very entertaining story. The Author got a nice way to develop his view of the overused theme VRMMORPG + Reborn MC + OP Knowledge/stats and mixes elements of many different styles.I'll try to summarize without spoilers:PROs: * Elements mixed from Game stories, apocaliptical stories, RPG, etc.* Good background construction and use of background elements - author could make a better descriptions of citys and sites the MC visits, like describing architeture, climate, but, even so, it's not bad the way it is now.* There are many misteries about the world and development of the story, but the author answers a part of this relatively fast. New dramas are constructed in a smooth way, so that we readers keep entertained.CONs:* Writing quality at the beggining is poor, with a lot of grammar errors. It gets better, especialy after 100 chapters.*MC, sometimes, makes stupid decisions, and repeat some nonsenses. In regards of personality, I guess it's ok (there are times i think he looks to be a psyco). But, stuff like having inventory function, and always hunting for food, even knowing that he cant cook. BTW, he could buy any cooking skill in his travels, or some seasoning!* Author has a nasty habit of tricking his readers with comments outside the author's comment area, and using excessively stat and quest views to increase word count and get paid for text that shouldn't be in the story. BTW, this practice makes me not give 5 stars in all the stories I rate with this practice when they go premium.
Although i like MCs fame, the leveling and overpoweredness just happens too soon and is too ridiculous and outlandish. Not even 1% grounded.
Although there are only a few chapters so far the premise is great. I love stories involving the occult so hopefully it develops well. Keep up the good work!
what can i say. to many plot in the beginning chapter then no explanation. firstly he get the skill then collect to mysterious box. then he mention his sister and big regret not saving her. while saving his sister, he mention about op weapon. hmmmm kinda bs is that.
I couldn't believe that i didn't write a review so far considering how h like commenting. this book not BS is absolutely something new to me. there is nothing too cliche here. u love the world background the character design and Ain is absolutely cute ? ?, smart and funny.all the supporting characters are absolutely gorgeous ? GOSH. AIN: dwo rwead Ains bwook,and expewience a whole new gwonre (genre) of a world you've newer sween beforw
REALLY hope this one gets picked, since it has major potential. Also I dunno if it's true that the translator skipped content but what ever! If you can't find the whole, deal with the cut and sliced half!
Disappointing.From the title I assumed that the MC would come to his own conclusions on cultivation and auxiliary jobs like arrays and alchemy , but it's just a system that spoon feeds him information and him carrying it out.Even if it was him using an AI Chip like the one from Warlock in a Magus World, at least he would have to feed it data in order to get information, but this... he's just getting information stuffed into his brain with no effort.
It is really funny and i like that he is already overpowered but can tou make more chapters
I could read until ch7 because When I saw the status screen again I just droped this.mc killed a fox and gain 2 level then killed 99 fox he only got 3 more levels I think this is wrong.
A Top quality novel with with unique and interesting ideas , this type of novel is first for me. I hope the author continues and created more amazing chapters
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