I'm finally here to drop my own review after reading 33 chapters. I'm honestly loving it so far and I hope I will continue to love it this way. So far from what I've read of this writer's other works, I hope to also see those heated moment and scenes you write in the other books that makes one wish they were the FL.? don't mind me, I'm always looking forward to those kind of things.
This novel starts off great but then sadly takes a turn for the worse, by which I mean it gets racist as most modern Chinese tend to do sadly. Expect anyone not Chinese to either be evil and stupid or worship the protagonist cause 'reasons', Expect many insults towards Japan, India. Vietnam. Korea etc basically any country China doesn't get along with.
I doubt the Authors ever get to see any of these reviews but stop the senseless racism ruining perfectly decent novels. Also, Lol @ webnovels hypocrisy when their own policy is against racism but they host all these blatantly racist novels.
So here it is...I read the much I could...why not the latest !??cz of the poor choice of mc the author picked.the story base is good ...all details so far is also good...language or writing is also good...but the most disappointing thing is the way author put yhe story together...he wanted a comedy story but the way i found it at least is a crap drama type...*no offense author*then the mc...well he was supposed to be a comedy mc yea...but him being such a shitty piece of work and lame piece of shit with all he does and well as his way of doing things is bad ...for me at least...some might like it but i couldn't...the story has very good potential ...if the mc can be improved then it can be made into an awesome story...now some might say why does a comedy mc needs to be good in the head or something...well mind you people...doing shenanigans doesn't need a brain dead shitty fk mc...even a calm or intelligent mc can do it...and mind you nobody is perfect yea...and i don't expect him to be intelligent but at least use all the options available to to the best possible way etc...well whatever...hope the author improves these things...and if not just delete this review...Just wanted to give my view point so it will develop more...cz it's a very interesting concept and story line...well keep it up...
Fantastic story, great characters, amazing writing, overall perfect. Would appreciate if it got more chapters as it is an amazing story. Love to see that school story ark and see Kei’s quirk develop further as well as the capabilities of his quirk
Suprisingly the translation quality is pretty good but thats pretty much everything praiseworthy for this novel.I read 5 chapters and the story is about a pet trainer with a system? (the translation calls it that) which is basicly only a translator that lets it hear the thoughts of pets and gives it missions/ rewards to for basic quest The story is pretty basic but boring because the mc has no goals/ resolutions besides becoming a pet trainer (not even something cliche as getting stronger since his parents died mysteriously)The character design? whats that? can you eat it? It doesnt describe the mc at all and only gave a basic description of the female childhood friend (fair, tail and heroic with a ponytail..)World background: Who needs that if you can have faceslaps and gender bias instead.. The female childhood friend and a man called his pet lousy and he is completely enraged at the guy and didnt even care about his friend saying the same. Hes also "forced" to faceslap at a training center because no one believes his "lousy pet" to be strong and everyone needs to comment how bad he is.The only thing (its not even mentioned properly) is that pets need 5 stars to get to the next stage
Lovely written. Amazing plot.great story and strong FL.rollercoaster ride for emotions.
Honestly the dynamic of the relationship between the MC and her group is rather enjoyable. Instead of making everyone flock to the MC they have a girlfriend, as problematic as the relationship is proving to be. Beyond that the world has a good grasp of what's going on and as people come in more information is put out in an easy, understandable, and believable manner. I'm looking forward to see what else comes up from their trip plus how they deal with the problem they created. Thank you author and I am excited for more chapters.
Hello there………It’s time for another REVIEW!!!!!!1-Starts off slow and steady2-Grammar very good3-Amazing Characters4-Character Development is extremely well done5-Overall it’s a well done novel GOOD JOB AUTHOR
Really amazing novel. Really hope the author continues sometime soon.
Seems a bit redundant. Idk… take over the women in his family, go to next kingdom, do the same seems to be general layout. it’s not bad I guess but when you add in the fact that he won’t have to struggle or put in much effort to gain the women in his family because their love for him is 90+, I have a feeling I won’t enjoy it as much as I could have. But for those of you looking to read something like this, where a son conquers the entire family etc, this is probably right up your alley. One bit of advice I have for the author is to change Bro -> Brother. And don’t say bro in every sentence the little sister says. Whether or not it’s a Chinese setting, bro in every sentence and in and of itself seems a bit off to me. Then add on the fact that it is a Chinese setting, using the word brother would definitely be the more suitable choice. If you ever go back to edit things, I think scaling down the numbers would make it more easier to understand. Numbers in the thousands and then millions just for dealing with one session of s * x is about… yeah. You could easily get away with making everything 100* smaller and not losing out on anything. I’ll be dropping for now. If this appears on the rankings because it’s become very popular i might pick up again. See you later, maybe.
Here's the author's HONEST review.i know shameless but FOR my first book i had to, anyone who has lived happy LIFE has used the power OF being shameless unless they want to be A mediocre talent or a NOBODY. . .
so far the chareters are quit different. they are all supposed to be the evil type monsters that the hero is supposed to fight but you see life from there side.