Author writes extremely heavy r*pe fetish/blackmail/sex slavery/sex trafficking novels.
hope you write more chapters this is great
He he’s doing rose wrong he needs to accept Her she’s going crazy
This is more of a question than a review. I read many novels on this app and I just cannot stand bad grammar.Im on chapter 5 and i wanna ask if the writing gets at least a little better cause if not, then im afraid i will have to drop this.(im not an english speaker myself so i understand some errors, i probably messed up something in my review as well, but just cant stand first chapters)
लेखकाने ज्या प्रकारे फॅंटेसी जगाची रचना केली आहे, ती रंजक आणि तपशीलवार भरलेली आहे. प्रत्येक ठिकाण आणि प्रत्येक पात्राचे स्वतःचे महत्त्व आहे.
"Naruto right?"
"Yeah, not surspising, its kinda hard tough."
"Oh okay this is your 50 dollar." The man gave the money to Monster.
The boy ran for his life as if there were no tomorrow, while dodging the balls of fire that his father threw, until the training reached a dead point where he could easily dodge his father fireballs while having a grin. The father of the child only snorted and made him come closer.
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