Yet another case of an interesting idea ruined by poor writing. Honestly this is one of the worst quality cultivation novels I've ever read, and that's saying something.
Ive read the first few chapters, and the story is great, but i fell like i know too much ybout the lore of LOL to enjoy this novel, especially bringing in a girl called Misha, is like inviting trouble, especially when Aatrox or Zoe ever apear in that story, or the thing with Shyvanna, i understand that the story changes a few things, but turning a half dragon in a beautiful lady seems kinda off, especially regarding the amount of realism Yummi, Rek'sai and Garen got. And its already kinda setting bad flags incase Lux should ever become part of the story
i personally haven't read it yet so i will leave an update later, i am only posting a review now because i will probably forget to later........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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How is the Novel? It's Average, It's looks like something made after reading omniscient reader,blood warlock. The plot is so forced that it is full of loopholes and too much context Is added in a short amount of chapters,The story is great and has a lot of potential but idk it feels too rushed and lacks anything worth remembering,The beginning of the plot was great and first 50 chapters were unique and rlly good imo and it was all great until the angels full on decided to go on war with him,It's not like I'm against the idea where the Mc fights with the angels... it's a really exciting part but the thing is it becomes quite repetitive where the angels become dumb af who just shoot the star weapon thing repetitively,I lost a lot of braincells after this stuff and the plot becomes even more ridiculous where the Mc falls in love with Karoline,Idk what happened and when they became close enough to get into a relationship... Too forced imo and rushed af. It pains me to say this but I have lost hope in this novel which could have been executed in a better way ?
The main point of a sect is a theosophy not in conflict with the established state. If we have a population producing with religious leadership, we have states like ancient Egypt where the leader is administrative and religious. In the case of China the Sects are Feudal. In the Feudal regime there is wealth in production coming from the Earth to an authority. A Sect can drain workers from other fiefs which is bad for nearby fiefs but excellent for a monarch who wants a centralized yet religiosity dependent. The sect must be religious but without the desire or ambition for enlargement subservient to the monarch.
My guess is all the bad reviews are deleted, cause this is not great. It’ not a bad premise, but very definitely not small upgrades. The writing quality is grade school level, or non native English speaker level
The first 25 chapters was amazing then it became trash. don't waste your time on this nonsense.
Nice title of your story. Your story is really good. The plot is strong. characters are well managed. on the whole, I like your story. keep it up.