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yoh Author here.. Gratitude to all trying Legend of Oasis and those who are yet to... don't forget to leave your thoughts as you journey through the novel... once again Gratitude
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I like the concept of getting reincarnated into the Bleach universe. Kiyota is nice main character and the system Siri. I like how Kiyota can get skills from different animes. I wish there were more chapters available.
The story so far is super interesting and I love the chemistry between the characters, can’t wait for more chapters!
I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together.The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth.The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them.Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery.Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.
it was a great experience reading this story❤❤❤❤❤. ...... I loved it because I am fond of BL story specially romantic bl story ??????l can't wait for remaining chapters ??
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"Help? Ha ha ha, you're funny."
I immediately drink a water and say goodbye to my father.
"Kaenji! Can you not talk about anime for 5 minutes?"
He also did not explain about the crystal which now burned with smouldering blue-black flames in a metal container at the centre of the twin garage, which had been emptied for this purpose. Ren Zexian did stress, however, that the ability users should not pour their powers into the crystals; they were not strong enough for what would occur should they attempt to. When speaking to Nathan, he explained more carefully, in a steady, low voice, for he feared that the youth might accidentally connect with the crystals when watering their tree. Neither he nor Tyler had cultivated their abilities in an efficient manner, the loss of their spiritual energies to the crystal would be devastating to them.
Jinho had to agree on the other hand that Yuan was growing and he had to be a little stricter when it came to rearing him. He really shouldn't let his son get away with his mischief nor willfulness – his refusal to speak for instance. Until now Yuan couldn't say anything else aside from his usual "dadas" which was a cause for their concern since his learning process was delayed – or not since as the doctor said, Yuan could but just didn't want to speak.
