This is my first novel I wrote and hopefully won't be the last. I appreciate any sort of feedback you have so please roast my work.I'll try my best to update 1 chapter daily but keep in mind they'll be quite short.Hope you enjoy the story
It becomes more interesting as I read after every chapter. I will need to read further to see how the MC would be going through the next few days as she lives in her own ‘inner’ peaceful world that she has built in order to save herself from the imminent arrival of the current world’s demise, where she temporarily lived.
I have no idea what this book is about, but as a wise person once said: "Damn dude, that cover is pretty fire" I said that, and I am right, cool cover
This story is intriguing! The tragic end for their world is terrible! Its is a very male-oriented novel, i assure you. Not my type of tea, but the narration is good and so is the writing style. I imagined it like a mixture of avatar and monster hunter and a sprinkle of warcraft. I thought for a second it was for girls because of the cover.. (sorry author)
This is my very first book on this appguys please support ???
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Transmigrated Into The True Heiress follows the journey of an assassin who finds herself transmigrated into the body of a timid, naive high school girl. Though supposedly the legitimate daughter of her household, she faces cruel treatment from her stepmother and sister. What I love most about this story is its smooth progression, free from irrelevant fillers or “commercial breaks.” Estrella keeps the storytelling focused and to the point. The writing style is descriptive and immersive, particularly during the action scenes, which are thrilling and will keep you on the edge of your seat. It’s evident that the author has done thorough research, as the narrative feels refined and well-edited.As for the characters, Eira didn’t resonate with me immediately, though I admire her feisty, strong-willed nature, which is well-portrayed. However, some scenes, like her encounter with Jania, felt somewhat irrelevant. Mira’s motivations for her cruelty have been explained, and Alan, well, he has a truly disgusting personality! The introduction of the male lead, Lyle, is interesting, though I haven’t caught up with all the updates yet. I’m curious to see more about his sudden possessive interest in Eira/Ephyra. Is he a werewolf or perhaps a supernatural being? And why has the AI system gone silent around him? There were a few moments of confusion with the interchangeable use of “Eira” and “Ephyra” to refer to the female lead.Overall, this is an intriguing and well-written piece. I highly recommend it—5 stars and a chef’s kiss! Looking forward to more updates.
This book is amazing. I like the fact that the female lead is an independent and free spirited woman who knows what she wants.
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Really great story with good character development. I’m thoroughly enjoying the read and am always anxious for the next chapter. Thanks for an entertaining read!
This should be number 1 ranked in my opinion. It’s such a good book!
1. The writing is all done in the present tense for some odd reason, and is not very good.2. The story is slow. You could read 40 chapters, and only a few days has passed.The story so far (140 chapters in) focuses on the MC in the academy. It is a powerful contender to Harry Potter, I would say, in terms of hour it grabs your interest in the lore. But, the slowness and the dragging of events as well as the bad writing plays to its detriment. It feels the MC won’t finish year 1 of school until we hit chapter 900.