TO AUTHOR: Updated synopsisThis is a complete and total correction to the synopsis. Didn't want you to miss it since I replied in a comment previously.Please read carefully, I fixed it while trying to keep your original words as much as possible. The synopsis is a bit long and it looks too much like an essay, I'm really not sure what the attention span of readers on this site is but it's best to space things out so they don't feel overwhelmed.I'm sure you know or have seen people who encounter a block of text and immediately skim it or don't read it. I'm not sure if the comment keeps formatting but take a look at most other synopsis on the site, They follow either of the two: 1) Short synopsis in which case it's okay to be a paragraph 2) Longer synopsis in which case everything is broken apart and spaced out so it seems much more friendly.Again, I tried to preserve your original words and intentions as best as possible but let me know if you want thoughts on changing something. I don't mind helping with this bit since it isn't too time consuming. If the comment doesn't have spacing, try not to keep the multiple sentence paragraphs like you're writing an essay. You want it to look friendly, not intimidating to people who are impatient and judge by first impression.I wanted to tell you to check out "Pro Writing Aid". Grammarly is for grammar and punctuation. ProWritingAid is basically it's big brother that covers everything else, as long as you're not horribly misspelling words this should really help you out. I used to use it in college and still use it on rare occasions. There should be a trial you can try out as well, it doesn't even hurt to get your readers opinions while trialing it and see how they feel if you want that route. My corrections below, you'll have to figure out the formatting Everyone loves the protagonist, and it’s difficult not to since they’re the centerpiece of the story, nothing seems to move if they don’t. You’re happy when they achieve great things and sad, maybe even disappointed when they lose or fail. How many people fall in love with a novel and wish they could live in that world? What happens if their wish comes true? There’s a reason people say “Be careful what you wish for, you might get it”. Is reincarnation as easy as it sounds? Sure, if you don’t mind being a nobody. Can someone who was just a normal person change the world they were reincarnated in? Not just to survive but thrive? Can they magically be accustomed to great pain and hardship or does it actually take willpower. This is the story of a boy who died only to reincarnate into a novel he had read, Dawn of Legends. Unlike other stories, he reincarnated into an extra who is just cannon fodder; someone who’s only purpose is to be used by the villains and protagonists to achieve their goals. Someone you could forget, whose life means nothing to the plot. At first, he was in despair, shocked and confused about what to do, racking his mind figuring out how to survive this harsh world. He was in a pinch whether to stay low-key or use his future knowledge to get stronger while befriending the protagonist. But will everything go according to plan? Will future events follow the same route in the novel with him influencing the world?Can he overcome all the crises that are bound to happen in the future? Does the world have other plans for him?Is his reincarnation just a coincidence or are there other forces at play? This is the tale of an ordinary boy, not a once in a millennium, martial artist or genius, billionaire who adapt from the very first day and establish their dominance; this is the tale of a boy who rises and climbs higher, step by step.Accompany Lucas on his journey, armed with future knowledge and a system as he traverses obstacles in his path, fighting against a world unlike what he knew before, and to find out the mystery behind his reincarnation.
Alabada sea la imaginación del autor..... !!Autor!! Tomate tu tiempo, no arruines algo tan bien escrito, hace mucho que no leo algo tan bueno.
So wrong title because there is nothing in this novel with simulation. In fact, the mc complains so much it takes up half of a chapter. Mostly mc complaining to system about the tasks needed to gain rewards.
I've yet to read all of it, but it's pretty good so far! Reading this one inspired me and kept grabbing my attention at every turn. Please continue the good work!
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Honestly, ordinarily this work would be at least 4 stars for me. The attention to detail is fantastic as the author seems to notice the little bits about this type of world and using powers that other authors miss. The writing itself is quite superb with the right mix of adjectives, vivid descriptions and no grammatical errors.The pacing of the world is jarred, we learn about the new world insidiously; slowly and in a measured manner for multiple chapters and then all of a sudden, information is flying our way from nowhere. This works for this novel though because it creates suspense and carries the reader along.The immediate flaw of the work is in character interactions, the characters are three-dimensional but in the author's attempt to make them very complex, they often come across as inconsistent, almost in-human.But the biggest flaw and the main reason for my rating is the MC. He is passive, naive and hopelessly reactive. Unlike other MC's who make things happen and take control, the MC lets things happen and only does something when in a tight spot. As a result, he has somehow ended up being a toy for multiple powerful forces due to his sheer stupidity. He feels very half-hearted without a shred of resolve and thinks and acts like 21st century, first-world **** who has yet to stop suckling at his mother's teat. He makes for an immensely frustrating read and has brought me to the brink of dropping this work multiple times. It is rare for such a good quality work to have one character Fuck it all up but somehow the author has managed to achieve that. And I, as a reader, do not know whether to be impressed at the finesse required to achieve such or angry that such a good book has been made sub par by the individual meant to be its linchpin.
I had read this in mtl before... Not a good read, just like those recently publish novel from China... Filled with racism, nationalism, and forced plot... And the story didn't make sense, really...
This book is a masterpiece, I recommend you to read this book NOW.why this book is not popular, this book should appear in the main page, this thing is really making me angry.