A bit arrogant rating my story 4.8? Yes and sorry =P.This is my first time writing a story but I promise you won't be bored. Why? Because as a reader and a geek, I also love long intricate world building, complex characters, strong female leads or supporting characters and not some over powered main character getting everything he can get. I promise that if you read my story, you will be confused with some big details but not bored at all. :D
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This is so good!! I'm proud that I'm the first reader of this novel...this novel should got a better recognition!! Not boring and I'm excited to the first meet of xhan and jiang
This has been great to read but what type of antihero will the MC be. Will he become a murderhobo and kill any criminal he sees or will he remain mostly as he has been. Can anyone let me know it would be greatly appreciated Thanks.
good characters just like Victor, I love his personality and loyalty towards elias.?
Mmm I got to say that the 10 chapters was good but I hope the mc has a bit of control over his body then what I saw yes I do love the story but I hope mc doesn’t act like he did when he meet the villain again. But has control but still likes her you get what I mean and why did his personality change from his first appearance it’s kind of weird that he was clam in the first chapter when Death was near but he was a cowered when he reincarnated to the game world which just made this novel from 10/10 to 8/10 and since he is a male character he shouldn’t have acted like that which makes me not want to read it but I get that it the other girl body so I was okay with it but I hope in the future he has control and is more daring to do stuff with the fl instead of her taking control over her will the novel was good that the only reason I give it a 10/10 for only 10 chapters because I don’t have much information about the novel
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I'm really enjoying this novel so far! It's got a fresh and unique feel compared to most web novels out there. The power system is new and pretty captivating, and the author does a great job building up a mysterious vibe. It's also really well-written, which adds to the overall experience. Since the story is just starting, I’m excited to see how the main character develops, especially since he's still figuring things out like anyone would when thrown into a new world. I can't wait to see how all the mysteries unfold, how the MC uncovers the truth behind the 'Veil,' and the reason he was thrust into this new world.That said, if you're not into mysterious plots or aren't patient enough to let things unfold, you might find it a bit slow. But honestly, it's still in its early phase, so I'd say give it a chance!
This book is must read?. Right from the first Chapter, I couldn't stop reading. It's maddd?
Good novel, keep writing it's just need single luck to be popular and blow up...............................................................
what can I say about this story this story is definitely one of the best if not the best kingdom building strategy story I've ever seen From what I've seen so far the author has a lot of talent for creating kingdom building strategy stories also author Have you ever thought about creating other stories based on strategy games Like RTK Have you ever thought about creating stories based on Europa Universalis IV ck3 Nobunaga's Ambition, especially the last one
A fine cultivation novel, which clearly depicts the cruelty of the cultivation world and also shows the main character's inner struggles beautifully. It's very different from those cliche cl novels, where hot-blooded Mc's just go running around chasing dumb cats and offending arrogant young masters. All in all, I have enjoyed this novel thus far and hope it stays the same.